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The Wizard of Pie

The Wizard of Pie The Wizard of Pie was a magical man With raspberry features, a coconut tan He lived in a bakery atop of the hill Where crust grew in gardens and bloomed on the sill There was a big warehouse he constantly swept Where pumpkins and apples and cherries were kept The villagers loved him, it was no surprise For he made the best ever Christmas Eve pies Though this year was different, his pies were the same But something had happened that tarnished his name A villager spotted him eating some cake And called him a liar and called him a fake The news spread like fire, the villagers cried They couldn’t believe that their baker had lied Until he explained, hoping they’d understand It was a new recipe, something he planned A pie that was cake in a cake that was pie It wasn’t that good, but he just had to try They forgave him for sure, yes they had to believe For they all wanted pies and it was Christmas Eve
11/28/18 Written for: The Punny Holiday Pies Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Michelle Faulkner

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Date: 12/17/2018 4:34:00 PM
This is GREAT, Chris--so creative. CONGRATS! Janice
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Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2018 5:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Janice. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 12/17/2018 12:10:00 PM
Chris, kudos on your top win! What a delightfully whimsical poem :) ~Mark
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Date: 12/17/2018 12:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Mark. I appreciate your visit and comment
Date: 12/17/2018 8:47:00 AM
Hi Chris, You penned a good piece for the contest theme. It was entertaining tale with great rhymes. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/17/2018 12:35:00 PM
Hey there my friend. Thank you so much. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 12/16/2018 9:31:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Chris, with this great poem.
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Date: 12/17/2018 8:03:00 AM
Thanks Line, I am happy you liked it
Date: 12/16/2018 8:27:00 PM
Chris, congratulations on your top win with this magical poem , so well deserved, terrific rhymes!!!
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Date: 12/17/2018 8:03:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 12/16/2018 4:35:00 PM
Love it...the villager spied him eating some cake! Congratulations on first place, Chris!
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Date: 12/17/2018 8:03:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kim.
Date: 12/16/2018 4:15:00 PM
Wow Chris, this was everything I was hoping for, just delightful! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 12/17/2018 8:03:00 AM
Thank you so very much Michelle. I am honored to have placed so high in your contest and thrilled you enjoyed this
Date: 11/30/2018 2:28:00 AM
Wonderful entry! Other than craving blueberry pie (that I don't have), I thoroughly enjoyed the poem and was certainly entertained. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 11/30/2018 8:02:00 AM
Thanks so much CayCay. It was difficult staying within the 20 line limit, but I tried and I am happy you liked it.
Date: 11/29/2018 12:19:00 AM
I love your poem and I love your pie. They're always delicious and pleasing to the eye!
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Date: 11/29/2018 7:26:00 AM
Thanks one more time Carol for visiting so many of my poems tonight
Date: 11/28/2018 2:50:00 PM
the lightheartedness of your work entranced, chris... great storyteller you are... all goes well, from pie to cake; a christmas cheer indeed... much enjoyed... huggs
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Date: 11/28/2018 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette
Date: 11/28/2018 1:39:00 PM
LOL Haven't seen the contest yet, but enjoyed your poem very much, Chris! In Meredith, New Hampshire, there is a "Pie Guy" who makes and sells nothing but pies. Your verse made me think of him. Yummy are his pies, but the cost is sky high. Next time I'll order from the Wizard of Pie. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 11/28/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thanks so much Carolyn. The contest rules were hard for me because there was a 20 line max and I always get carried away with these types of poems, so I had to enter the Readers Digest version. :) Thanks again my friend, your comments always bring a big smile to my face.

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