The Withering

Waves bash the coast wearing down boulders into sand
Life seems to be fading from this once fruitful land
The clouds no longer sail against a great blue sky
The sun no longer shines
Trees that once stood tall grow weak 
Not wanting to sprout high
Birds that live in them no longer want to fly
Their young don’t even want to spread their wings and try
All I can do is watch and ask myself ….. why ?
Now the waves have stopped 
The ocean has run dry
I guess all things that were once strong must grow old and die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 2:56 PM
I like your writing style James, creative, crisp, clean, imaginative and all round super>>i hope your on the Soup for years to come, we will see so much more>>James
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July 19, 2009 at 7:54 PM
James, I love this poem! hope you don't mind I gave you credit for the inspiration for my just-posted poem, "the circle" jim
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July 8, 2009 at 7:35 AM
It sure seems that way doesn't it James. But one needs to be thankful to live to a ripe old age. Awesome write. Love, Carol
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