The Withered Dream

Darkness, darkness everywhere Like a warm blanket in winter Like the shell of an oyster Darkness, white and grey and blue and red Darkness makes me wildly mad The old banyan tree has become my friend it so often invites me to chat I chat freely with it though no response because I am left alone nobody sane And busy youthful person cares to sit with me spend with me a moment a single moment I know I talk of the past so many times repeated they mock me though at my back the Old haggard the useless old man again on his tricks who will have the time to listen to his Foolish prattles THE TIME… The deafening silence everywhere The old and fragile staff to hold All the world shuns you there The deafening silence makes me mad Thinking of the old days opens up the fountain of tears though weeping openly will make me seem Insane insane they call me though at my back even my grandchildren avoid me they are busy In their own world do I remember my long dead wife? She constantly returns In my dream I stretch my arms towards her she evades laughingly they call me brooding old man I get angry ANGRY AND SHOUT AT THEM I shouldn't have reacted thus… oh god I… I… I go back To my Own banyan friend My staff One step, two step oblivion

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Date: 11/28/2014 6:33:00 AM
What a sad story you have told. I'm not sure where some of the metaphors come from ie: the oyster shell. But the story catches my emotions.
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Prasenjit Banerjee
Date: 11/29/2014 5:54:00 AM
it was written after I went to visit one of my most revered persons... fragile, old, depressed he was; I was so much moved by his ruined personality. Thanks for commenting. Oysters generally hide inside their shells, isn't it?... Prasenjit
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