Red Fiery Poet Free verse

The Witch- Collaboration With Liam Mc Daid

The WITCH 
A
furore 
in the town,
draped in black gown,
a WITCH is brewing a storm.
Bringing nightfall to the dainty
spiked with malevolence and vanity
spitting a curse from her wicked tongue
       Silently scoffing the blood of old and young 
          eyes of medusa , cursed to the bottom of the sea
      she is the descendent of a dark world of fantasy.
The magic emanates from her ravenous eyes, 
rendering the stories of deceit and lies,  
grimaced into the gloominess,
of shallows and emptiness,
she is brewing a storm
draped in a black
Gown .


© By rEdfiery and Liam Mc Daid 2016

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Eve Roper June 16, 2016 at 8:30 PM Love these lines between you and Liam :-) thank you for reading Insecure Attachment :-) Hugs

Richard Lamoureux June 15, 2016 at 3:33 PM I just did my first Collaboration with Liam. I hope you are having a good day Red. Red Fiery June 16, 2016 at 2:41 AM it was a stupendous collaboration ...congrats !!! ~ ReD~

Jan Allison June 10, 2016 at 11:03 AM such a fabulous dark poem - great collaboration Liam and Red Fiery :-) hugs Jan xx 7 Red Fiery June 16, 2016 at 2:49 AM Hugs ~ Red Fiery June 16, 2016 at 2:48 AM Dear Allison, I really admire your works too..I strongly believe that you are a wonderful Poetess...~ Red

Judy Ball June 9, 2016 at 1:10 PM WoW! Sounds like the witch has her tunic in a knot. She must be mad at somebody about something. Great job here. Kudos to both of you. God Bless and a seven from me. JB Red Fiery June 16, 2016 at 2:47 AM thank you Judy...it's so nice of you ~ Hugs ~Red

Robert Pettit June 9, 2016 at 9:35 AM Start putting firewood around the stake. Very descriptive write in a fascinating shape.

Richard Lamoureux June 7, 2016 at 5:47 PM Cool! I also like he shape of the piece. Red Fiery June 16, 2016 at 2:49 AM Thank you Ric:))))~ Red

Paul Callus June 7, 2016 at 9:11 AM It is a pleasure to be reading this excellent collaboration once again. Full marks to both collaborators...well done Red and Liam! Regards // paul Red Fiery June 16, 2016 at 2:42 AM Thank you paul for enlightening me with your comments~Red~

Timothy Hicks June 5, 2016 at 10:09 PM Thanks for checking out my latest poem, Red ... as well as pointing out the mistake on my part. I changed it now with italics and normal font. Nothing wrong with your eyes :) Red Fiery June 16, 2016 at 2:43 AM That poem was really great ...thank you for visiting me ~Cheers Red~

Timothy Hicks June 5, 2016 at 5:23 PM Mischievous and brooding ... and even the shape of the poem looks sorta like an eye cut in half. Very vivid images, Red & Liam. I enjoyed the creation. Red Fiery June 16, 2016 at 2:44 AM Thank you Timothy..I really appreciate your kind visits..~ Red ~

Sunita U.D Palawon June 3, 2016 at 12:13 PM Scary...but very creative.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 3, 2016 at 5:03 AM Dark and scary BUT the light of your poetic genius throws out any fear of the heart and leaves the soul free to celebrate poetry at its best! A seven to each dear, Red Fiery and dear Liam! A fav.

Tom Quigley June 2, 2016 at 10:39 PM Wow! Great imagery and shape!

Liam Mcdaid June 2, 2016 at 5:39 PM also thank you silent and anne lise for the heartfelt beautiful comments wishing you both a blessed day

Liam Mcdaid June 2, 2016 at 5:37 PM thank you red for the pleasure of joining ink really love the structure wishing you a blessing of a day pal Red Fiery June 16, 2016 at 2:46 AM It was great working with you Liam..cheers ~ Red

Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2016 at 12:47 PM - A dark and creepy witch, Red & Liam :) - Great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Red Fiery June 16, 2016 at 2:45 AM Thank you Anne..Hugs back to you ~ Red