The Witch

A
furore 
in the town,
draped in black gown,
a WITCH is brewing a storm.
Bringing nightfall to the dainty
spiked with malevolence and vanity
spitting a curse from her wicked tongue
       Silently scoffing the blood of old and young 
          eyes of Meddussa , cursed to the bottom of the sea
      she is the descendant of a dark world of fantasy.
The magic emanates from her ravenous eyes, 
rendering the stories of deceit and lies,  
grimaced into the gloominess,
of shallows and emptiness,
she is brewing a storm
draped in a black
Gown .


© By rEdfiery and Liam Mc Daid 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/8/2016 7:24:00 AM
Very well done
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Date: 7/7/2016 7:05:00 PM
Very Nice
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Date: 6/23/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Liam for sharing your canvas with me... :)I am happy that our fellow poets have admired our collabs.. Cheers~Red
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Date: 6/8/2016 4:41:00 PM
Gosh this is very deep and dark Liam and redfiery - love the structure of the poem:-) congrats on a great collaboration:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2016 8:53:00 AM
Hi Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a very dark, n' creepy poem, you've written here my dearest friend Liam and this time in collaboration with Red Fiery.A very haunted n' scary piece you've written here, a very deep n' dark one indeed, but beautifully written.This one reminds me of Halloween n' of another one.Dazzling!Just awesome!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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