The Witch

A furore in the town, draped in black gown, a WITCH is brewing a storm. Bringing nightfall to the dainty spiked with malevolence and vanity spitting a curse from her wicked tongue Silently scoffing the blood of old and young eyes of Meddussa , cursed to the bottom of the sea she is the descendant of a dark world of fantasy. The magic emanates from her ravenous eyes, rendering the stories of deceit and lies, grimaced into the gloominess, of shallows and emptiness, she is brewing a storm draped in a black Gown . © By rEdfiery and Liam Mc Daid 2016

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Kelli White

Date: 7/8/2016 7:24:00 AM

Very well done

Michael Gelb

Date: 7/7/2016 7:05:00 PM

Very Nice

Red Fiery

Date: 6/23/2016 11:09:00 AM

Thank you Liam for sharing your canvas with me... :)I am happy that our fellow poets have admired our collabs.. Cheers~Red

Jan Allison

Date: 6/8/2016 4:41:00 PM

Gosh this is very deep and dark Liam and redfiery - love the structure of the poem:-) congrats on a great collaboration:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/8/2016 8:53:00 AM

Hi Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a very dark, n' creepy poem, you've written here my dearest friend Liam and this time in collaboration with Red Fiery.A very haunted n' scary piece you've written here, a very deep n' dark one indeed, but beautifully written.This one reminds me of Halloween n' of another one.Dazzling!Just awesome!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^