The Wisdom of the Sundial


I only tell of sunny hours...
for they are all I know.
To speak of winds, I would be vain
to guess which way they blow.

I will not try to gauge the rain.
How silly would I look!
The tides? the moon? to plant, or not?
Best check the farmer's book.

             . . . 

The sundial speaks of what she knows
of all else she is quiet.
I could be spared so many woes,
if only I would try it!










February 18, 2019
Sundial Wisdom Poetry Contest
Sponsor, Julia Ward

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Gauthier Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 10:10 PM
Back with congrats, PS. Well done.
Awtry Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 10:47 PM
Thank you, Line -ps
Rushing Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 7:29 PM
Congratulations on your win most deserving.
Awtry Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 8:03 PM
Thank you, Wren :) ~ps
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 9:28 AM
Back with Congrats P.S - wonderful honor well done! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Awtry Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Thank you Jennifer :) ~PS
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 9:16 AM
I appreciate an honest person well said PS Good luck. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Awtry Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Thank you, Jennifer! ~PS
Ward Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 3:43 AM
You tackled the subject matter very well leading to a fine win in my contest. Well done!
Awtry Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 8:16 AM
Thank you Julia. I’m very honored to have placed in your contest.
Fairchild Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 7:48 PM
I KNEW this would do well in the contest! I am so pleased! I love it! (The joke had me laughing at myself -- I talk far too much!)
Awtry Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 8:01 PM
Thank you Andrew. I doubt you talk too much :)
Smith Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 3:50 PM
Excellent poetry P.S, much enjoyed, congrats. :)
Awtry Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 4:26 PM
Thank you, Gary :)
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February 19, 2019 at 3:08 PM
Back with Congratulations! :))) xomo!
Awtry Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Thank you Maureen! I am so tickled to have placed! Thank you for letting me know!
Mcguire Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 9:06 PM
Wonderful! make me wonder if the sundial sees anything on a full moon?
Awtry Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 9:07 PM
she's not sayin ;) I think so, but I don't know what the shadow would mean... The sundial poems have me wanting to research it more...
Fairchild Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 8:13 PM
I love this! I HOPE YOU WIN! (You have my vote!)
Awtry Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 8:41 PM
thank you, Andrew. you are too kind...comments like yours make the NA's ok ;)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 4:31 PM
This is WONDERFUL P.S.! A winner for me :) My best to you in the contest! xomo
Awtry Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 4:47 PM
Thank you so much Maureen! I am glad you liked it!
Wolf Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 3:26 PM
This is an instant FAVE, P.S. Remarkable write! An absolute gem. Best wishes, Gershon
Awtry Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 3:30 PM
O thank you for the compliment and for the FAVE :)
Krutsinger Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 2:54 PM
The Farmers Almanac knows it all, well done indeed!
Awtry Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Thank you Caren. yes the Almanac is a know-it-all!
Cunningham Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 1:14 PM
You created a lovely image of a sundial in an old English country garden with the sun overhead casting its shadow. Enjoyed your verse P.S. Tom.
Awtry Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Thank you Tom :)
Rigoler Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 11:50 AM
I like your take on a ancient time-keeper, the sundial. I, too, have written a few on it, though less clever than yours. In reading your other poems, I see resemblances we share. Thank you for stopping by. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
Awtry Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 11:52 AM
What a lovely compliment! Thank you so much Maurice.
Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 11:48 AM
Well done, PS. Love it.
Awtry Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 11:50 AM
o good! Thank you, Line!
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