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The Winter

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Ice slowly melts to the new spring
a bride and groom and a new ring
frozen in their best lives
just before an avalanche
The grips of roses and hands
frozen are timely of sands
flaws like a wall of patches
And a cinema of a screening
Into glares of timely oblivion
A horror film of careless stitches
tiny eyes can't see our sins
its the only saving of grace
& we live as the ice wears thin
and we die as the children
have this new world to face.

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Date: 8/15/2025 5:10:00 PM
awesome imagery in this poem. I could feel the pain of the sharp 'coldness.' nicely done.
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