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The Wink

Waking,

Sun could see sky

reflecting its color

in the lake. 

Feeling playful, 

it winked pink


For Line Gauthier's Bitesize Poem No.57 Poetry Contest

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Paula Goldsmith

December 26, 2022 at 9:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. Have a great day...................

Susan Ashley

May 28, 2019 at 8:13 PM

Such fanciful imagery imbues your poem with elegant enchantment, Andrea. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier

May 28, 2019 at 5:46 PM

Totally adorable, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Brandon Carter

June 23, 2015 at 5:26 PM

Really short and sweet. Love the "winked pink".

James Fraser

June 18, 2015 at 3:17 PM

Pretty in Pink Wink Andrea, belated congrats on this lovely shortie, smiles ~ James :)

Shadow Hamilton

June 18, 2015 at 10:29 AM

stunning imagery Andrea your words perfectly match the picture hugs 7

Jennifer Walker

June 17, 2015 at 9:34 PM

Making that picture come to life again.

Arthur Vaso

June 14, 2015 at 12:56 AM

Winks! this is so artfully beautiful!

Michael Dom

June 13, 2015 at 11:10 PM

That's a nice way of looking at it, Angela.

Robert Johnson

June 12, 2015 at 10:00 PM

Love the picture and your clever interpretation on it. ;)

Constance La France

June 12, 2015 at 4:38 PM

Andrea, beautiful poem 7 and thanks for visiting my footles

Sara Kendrick

June 12, 2015 at 3:33 PM

Very colorful and playful work..I enjoyed reading your entry..Thanks for your participation...Congrats..Sara

Paul Callus

June 12, 2015 at 11:25 AM

Back with deserved congratulations, Andrea! That playful wink did the trick:) // paul

Sneha Rv

June 12, 2015 at 10:03 AM

This is lovely, dear Andrea!! :D :D

Eve Roper

June 11, 2015 at 5:18 PM

Congratulations on your win,Andrea, hugs dear friend Eve

Skat A

June 11, 2015 at 3:50 PM

Andrea, Congratulations........ SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2015 at 2:00 PM

Andrea, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA

Monterey Sirak

June 11, 2015 at 12:39 PM

I see this was a winner. Congrats. This little gem is perfection!!

Jan Allison

June 11, 2015 at 10:02 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

June 11, 2015 at 12:57 AM

Your poem reflects the amazing scene in this picture with perfection! I love this one Andrea. But you know I adore short poems the best.

Kim Merryman

June 10, 2015 at 9:40 PM

This is so cute, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Judy Konos

June 10, 2015 at 8:37 PM

Congratulations...Andrea sailing along......

Sandra Haight

June 10, 2015 at 6:54 PM

Lovely, Andrea. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Joseph May

June 10, 2015 at 6:24 PM

Congrats on a fine win Andrea

Paul Callus

June 10, 2015 at 4:06 PM

Very sweet and serene; both sky and sun play in the lake's pink embrace. // paul

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