The Winged Intruder

A shriek in the night was suddenly heard,
my daughter upstairs,'a bird,a bird',
my son runs to help and shouts 'magpie',
I yell 'open the window,so out it can fly'.
A magpie you say,I doubt it is so,
I'll take a look,ornithology I know.
It's not a magpie, you silly thing,
it's nothing but a common starling.
They've made a nest up in my loft,
they've used my old clothes,nice and soft.
i've patched up the hole,even had a new roof,
even so,it's not starling proof.
The poor bird's panting,scared to death,
barely able to catch its breath.
The window's open,good and wide
as I shoo the bird, out it does glide.
The panic is over,the bird is OK
but it will happen again another day.
I give up,I just can't win,
so I welcome the starlings and
let them come in.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/4/2014 4:12:00 AM
A delightful write, Jenny! Your words made me visualize the chaos of that night! I really liked this one! Jack C
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Date: 5/29/2014 11:15:00 PM
Mary Poppins says we should feed the birds , Tuppence a bag , So I hope you are saving up.
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Date: 5/15/2014 4:21:00 PM
They will always come back to where they nest..I have a bbq grill in my yard and the robins build a nest in there every year...wonderful write Jenny...hugs Tim
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 5/15/2014 5:11:00 PM
Yum, bbq robin xx lol. Thanks again Tim x
Date: 5/15/2014 1:02:00 PM
beautifully written Jenny and one I can relate to. Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2014 2:15:00 PM
dragonflies poem posted thanks for liking the avatar pic xxxx
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 5/15/2014 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Jan hun xx
Date: 5/15/2014 12:09:00 PM
Nice it is ! Welcoming end- note is beautiful. Next generation decides their behavior towards co-inhabitants watching our reactions. Well done and well said.
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 5/15/2014 1:54:00 PM
Thank you very much,Neelam
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