Notes About The Poem

The Winds of Time - Collaboration With Darren White:

The winds of time settling in one's own mind, Clarity of the past will dissipate, In the winds that blow you may be inclined, To find yourself standing there with your fate. Like the pollen in a flower, waiting, For life without yearning would be shallow, On thin ice we all find ourselves skating, We must treasure every moment, hallow. Soft bells will chime, a peaceful melody Serenity inside, accept a life Imperfect, yet with highs, with love, you see? It's how we are, all we can do is strive And washing over you are waves of calm The peace you find inside a soothing balm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Downing  Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 8:38 PM
I very much enjoyed reading this. So calming and refreshing :) A fab collaboration you two.
Coreggia Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 9:38 AM
This is a poem that keeps revealing more and more as you take the time to read again and again . . . and I love its peaceful ending; such a smooth finish to a brilliant piece:) Amitiés
Herlihy Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 12:44 AM
I am struggling to keep up with posting reviews and poems. So busy at work these days. Loved this from you both, wish I knew who wrote what. An utterly charming sonnet. I have been trying my hand at sonnets these days as well and hope to post them soon.
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 11:21 PM
I read this a few times, each time the wisdom sunk deeper, great poem!
Roper Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Wonderful write, W W, and Darren, especially the first two sentences in the second stanza.. great imagery ~*
Ella Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Wow! Very soothing poem! I love your collaborations <3 This one is a favorite :)
White Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 10:55 AM
Thanks my friend :)
Walker Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 10:56 AM
Love and happiness (and acceptance) - the balm for calm. A wonderful message. You guys did a GREAT job with this :)
White Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 10:54 AM
Thank you Lenna! We love to collaborate :)
Smith Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 10:17 AM
Wow guys this has to be your best...like a fine wine you get better with time.
White Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Thanks Tim. Wonderful compliment!
Sands Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations to the both of you for this inspirational poem to reach many :) Well done.
White Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Thanks Heidi, it's always wonderful to write together with Budgie.
Ricci Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:39 AM
Good Evening White Wolf. And yes Darren. Hi Penguin. To the both of you I say this is exceptional. Honestly. This is one that must be read out loud with emphasis and pauses between stanzas and thoughts. I can not put it in words, just know this has worth and value if you read back your words. So much of life is stated within them. Wonderful completely and entirely. Have a wonderful night White Wolf.
White Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Thanks Lisa, also on behalf of the howling wolf Budgie :) It's a very calming and peaceful poem, and I love it
Trifiatis Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 1:19 AM
Your profound writing and deep philosophical thought makes me fear that the days of my status as a philosopher are numbered my dear frieds: WW and Darren, Darren and WW. A 7 to each!
White Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Thanks Demetrios, and I do think the compliment is nice, but there's no greater philosopher than yourself :)
White Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 12:20 AM
As always, a wonderful collaboration with you Budgie :) I love this inspirational poem.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace