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The Winds of Dawn

Morningtide reverberates, the songstress calls, buoyant curlews play in oceans of copious grass, wave after wave shattering against dry stone walls, meadows dance the rhythm of the farmers weatherglass, implementing the orchestration from moortop squalls. © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Date: 3/17/2020 3:52:00 PM
Dearest Harry, my senses rejoiced and my heart and imagination waltzed with the rhythmic windswept beauty of your majestic poem. Your exquisite imagery unfolds so gracefully and more than satisfies one's soulful desires. Your artistry is so very special, dear poet, and I enjoy your wondrous poetic mind immensely. Warmest wishes always, my talented friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/12/2020 12:20:00 AM
Love the imagery in this one Harry, Tom
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Date: 3/3/2020 7:14:00 PM
Great poem. I love how it makes my mind join in.
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Date: 2/20/2020 3:14:00 PM
Your imagery is captivating, Harry! Reminds me of the fields sprawled around my grandfather's windmill, as seen from the top. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/17/2020 8:28:00 AM
You could be describing our prairies. The wheat blowing in the fields looks like ocean waves.
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Date: 2/13/2020 2:25:00 PM
This is a beautifully written painting Harry :)
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Date: 2/12/2020 1:42:00 PM
Of course, the moors can be a windswept ocean, with 'copious grass, / wave after wave" Stay blessed, & shalom Sir Harry
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Date: 2/10/2020 5:36:00 PM
An extraordinary piece of poetry Harry... I just love the rich descriptions and wonderful imagery throughout this poem... Very, very well written my friend!
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Date: 2/10/2020 1:14:00 PM
Sir Harry, your bring to my the best descriptions of Thomas Hardy and the Bronte sisters. I especially connect these precious lines with Tess of D'Urbervilles ... good company you keep. shalom, shalom
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Date: 2/9/2020 11:08:00 AM
You described morning very well..
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Date: 2/7/2020 11:05:00 PM
Harry, So picturesque and peaceful. Congratulations!!!
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Date: 2/7/2020 5:47:00 PM
Hello Harry … to be alone at dawn and gaze across the water is such a great time to cherish nature and ponder - thank you Harry - Lindsay
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Date: 2/7/2020 11:29:00 AM
I love watching the ocean at dawn...so much to see and hear...such vivid imagery in this one comes to life wonderfully... great penning :) hugs
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Date: 2/7/2020 6:03:00 AM
No better time of day Harry, love your imagery. Tom
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