The Windows of the Soul-Win

The eyes are the windows to the soul My ardent desire is to keep her eyes Eyes so beautiful Eyes so omniscient But how can I conserve it? Is there any preservative? Can a hospital do it? When they cremate her How can I look into her soul? Or she can look into mine? I can’t think of her to be lonely. She believed in pure love And she also said “No love without a touch” She even refused to accept flowers As they need not be considered the proof of love I am much agitated and unhappy As in death even her eyes sparkles iridescently.
+++++++ April 2, 2014 Form: Free Verse tenth place win Contest: Any poem goes 18 by Linda

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Date: 4/18/2014 8:26:00 PM
Yep, it's the eyes that have it. Congratulations on your placing.
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Date: 4/18/2014 7:16:00 PM
A deeply emotional and touching piece of poetry. The reader can feel the longing and loneliness in every line. A great write, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats. :)
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Date: 4/17/2014 2:28:00 AM
Congrats on winning poem Dr Ram ! Different n lovely !
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Date: 4/16/2014 7:45:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2014 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations Dr. Ram. Take care, Richard
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Date: 4/16/2014 10:56:00 AM
Very nice poem Dr Ram...congrats on the win
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Date: 4/16/2014 2:35:00 AM
DR RAM, THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORT... --------------- --------------- (((This is a copy paste note to every poet, PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE A REPLY ON THIS COMMENT. I'm not being rude, 95% of the time, I never come back to read the reply you left on my comment. i HAVE MY SOUP E-MAIL NOTIFICATION OFF :-( If for some reason, you want to give thanks. Let's do it the old fashion way. Drop by and read one of my poems, or send the thanks through soup mail, or just enjoy my visit. As I would yours. I don't enjoy comments on comment's. It takes away from every poet, One day Poetry Soup Will See it.... Have yourself a lovely day.)))
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Date: 4/3/2014 7:31:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative work that quietly poses questions..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/3/2014 6:17:00 AM
Questions of the soul, inspired by an undying love! ! Dr ram, this is stellar poetry! My best, chuck
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Date: 4/2/2014 5:36:00 PM
There is a lot of deep questions in this poem, questions that brought me pause to think...well done
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Date: 4/2/2014 8:42:00 AM
quite sad in some lines... _-eyes- _ the window of our soul... if there's only way to preserve it, and be the window to each soul forever... But I believe , God has made another way around to see someone's soul... it's the heart and mind that can travel along 'til infinities... This is a great poem ,Dr. Ram... ^__^
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