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The Windows of the Soul-Win

The eyes are the windows to the soul My ardent desire is to keep her eyes Eyes so beautiful Eyes so omniscient But how can I conserve it? Is there any preservative? Can a hospital do it? When they cremate her How can I look into her soul? Or she can look into mine? I can’t think of her to be lonely. She believed in pure love And she also said “No love without a touch” She even refused to accept flowers As they need not be considered the proof of love I am much agitated and unhappy As in death even her eyes sparkles iridescently.
+++++++ April 2, 2014 Form: Free Verse tenth place win Contest: Any poem goes 18 by Linda

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Date: 4/18/2014 8:26:00 PM
Yep, it's the eyes that have it. Congratulations on your placing.
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Date: 4/18/2014 7:16:00 PM
A deeply emotional and touching piece of poetry. The reader can feel the longing and loneliness in every line. A great write, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats. :)
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Date: 4/17/2014 2:28:00 AM
Congrats on winning poem Dr Ram ! Different n lovely !
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Date: 4/16/2014 7:45:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2014 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations Dr. Ram. Take care, Richard
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Date: 4/16/2014 10:56:00 AM
Very nice poem Dr Ram...congrats on the win
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Date: 4/16/2014 2:35:00 AM
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Date: 4/3/2014 7:31:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative work that quietly poses questions..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/3/2014 6:17:00 AM
Questions of the soul, inspired by an undying love! ! Dr ram, this is stellar poetry! My best, chuck
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Date: 4/2/2014 5:36:00 PM
There is a lot of deep questions in this poem, questions that brought me pause to think...well done
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Date: 4/2/2014 8:42:00 AM
quite sad in some lines... _-eyes- _ the window of our soul... if there's only way to preserve it, and be the window to each soul forever... But I believe , God has made another way around to see someone's soul... it's the heart and mind that can travel along 'til infinities... This is a great poem ,Dr. Ram... ^__^
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