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The Window

Over a labyrinth of dust carved by cockroaches scampering away at the faintest sign of company, waning light is unevenly cast by an old crackled glass window. Limp and age-stained curtains tint green the yellowish rays where they haven’t been eaten through by moths which flutter unwittingly along an old crackled glass window. The sullen mood satisfies the bees which hum, as they go to-and-fro, some sulking tune void of melody which reverberates nicely off an old crackled glass window. There is no living recollection not even among spiders peering wistfully about who have long-adorned in cobweb that old crackled glass window. Yet recorded in detail black and white on the wall hanging skewed from a nail is an old family portrait taken under a clear glass window. 07/18/15

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Date: 7/31/2015 6:11:00 PM
Oh this poem makes me think, one day my family portrait taken under a clear glass window would be the home to cobwebs and all their accompanies mentioned above, under a then broken glass window. I love how your mind pictured this so greatly for me to see it all , awesome.
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Date: 7/19/2015 5:52:00 PM
Love both the descriptions and the twist at the end. The repetition of the last line in each stanza has well served its useful purpose. #7 // paul
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Date: 7/18/2015 11:30:00 PM
Lol!!!! What an awesome write painted with vivis imagery, love it Excellent.......A.M.
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Date: 7/18/2015 7:56:00 PM
wow, I love how you put a different description in each stanza and always ended with old crackled glass window until that final line, bringing us to realize it was at one time a clear window with life behind it. You are a lovely writer, Preston.
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Date: 7/18/2015 8:17:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thanks for stopping by to read. This is kind of a strange write for me...not one of my favorites, anyway. But...since I wrote it, I figured I'd post it. Maybe I will have ideas to refine it and make it better later on, so I guess it's good to keep it, eh? Anyway...yeah, I appreciate your insights and feedback!

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