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The Wind Chimes

In the shelter of the Oak of the North: I hang, waiting for the Northern wind to come. I may be old, weak and rusted, And my rusted metals… already forgotten By those who stayed… under this oak’s shelter. Those memories…they still linger: The old wooden house with the white-wooded fence. The window in the attic… from where they looked. When the Northern wind came, they laughed, And I echoed them, while dancing in the wind. They hung me in here, and still I stay: Waiting for the wind, so to make them gay. I dance with the wind in early morning: I scarcely dance in the night. But once came the Northern wind With a strange but powerful sound, And I danced with it for one whole night But found their house… destroyed. August 19, 2018 Wind chimes poetry contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 9/15/2018 7:58:00 PM
Nice personification , Kaveesha, and the imagery you created is beautiful,,, Congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/1/2018 2:35:00 PM
I love your take on the wind chimes theme. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/29/2018 2:40:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, Kaveesha!:-) Lovely imagery in your wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/20/2018 6:02:00 AM
I enjoyed your Wind Chimes!
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