The Will To Survive

Will to survive

A tale of survivors guilt
or heroism do not with i begin

But rather with the opposite
of willing not to live

My nieces boyfriends brother
hung himself on Christmas day

And all i thought afterwards
was surely at some point right 
up until he tied the knot and 
placed it around his neck

Was how he found the strength
of will to do it

And how at no point leading up
to it he similarly could not summon
up the same force of will to undo it

As if only half the will and courage
that took was matched in equal
measure by the willingness to survive

Contemplating suicide would not have
been an option in the first place

So why and what's the defining reason
between him and those in far worse
dire consequence and situation

Who summon forth the strength of
will to overcome survive and tell

Than those who loose the will to live
in defiance of all reason

I suppose the reason is the very
reason itself and whether or not

If it's reason deemed worthy
enough for the mind to survive
in order to get back
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/17/2020 8:17:00 AM
A very sad write my friend. We also have a cousin whose 22 year old son committed suicide - for what goodness know he just left a note telling his parents he loved them. Heartbreaking. Great poem and sadly younger people seem to be drawn to this fatal end Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Flaherty Avatar
Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/18/2020 11:53:00 AM
Yeah he killed himself on holiday in Durban on Christmas day again no real valid reason . There was a young lad i played golf with only 16 who just got his Springbok Colours said to be the next best thing since Ernie Els who shot himself as well in pact with a few school friend's. Utter madness absolutely destroyed his Dad
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter