Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Tanka

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The Wild Ones

on redolence lane
tangled and wild roses teem
I'm going places
yellow birds fly through jade trees
cream and purple butterflies

joy down sunshine way
and hues are following me
waltzing in beauty
this portrait of summertime
so gold embossed on my mind

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Gershon Wolf July 7, 2021 at 9:02 PM One thing you can surely be grateful for 24/7 --- that G-d didn't create you color-blind... And we readers can surely be greateful for that as well. Thank you for the richness of your verse, Evelyn. Rainbows of Rapture, gw Evelyn Judy Buehler July 7, 2021 at 10:29 PM You are so welcome, Gershon. To me, colors are constant delight, and I'm grateful 24/7 for the gift of sight. Thank you for your comment. Colorful Combinations :)

Quoth Theraven July 6, 2021 at 1:24 PM Evelyn, I've been away too long from this place, this summertime painted in your mind. Fine brush strokes. -Richard Evelyn Judy Buehler July 6, 2021 at 4:07 PM It's good to have you back, Richard. Thank you for the fine compliment. Kindest regards, Evelyn :D

Judy Ball July 4, 2021 at 5:44 PM All the colors of Spring and Summer are a delight after a long cold Winter of snow and ice. We eagerly wait for Spring and long for warmer weather once Christmas has passed. Well done Evelyn. God Bless, B Evelyn Judy Buehler July 4, 2021 at 8:38 PM Having four seasons is so interesting, and it always gives us something to look forward to - sort of like lasting presents to open. Thank you for your appreciation, Judy. Kindest regards, Evelyn :)

Joseph P. DiMino July 4, 2021 at 2:12 PM That's what I love most about great poetry -- its ability to capture forever in time a simple, luscious day, or a soaring, monumental episode. Love it! Evelyn Judy Buehler July 4, 2021 at 3:06 PM I love it when a beautiful moment happens forever-for a short time! Thank you for the delight of your appreciation, Joe. Have a great 4th of July, Evelyn :)

Jennifer Proxenos July 4, 2021 at 12:25 AM This poem is a joy to read, with your bubbling words spilling out with enormous enthusiasm as a 'portrait of summertime, ..... embossed in your mind.' Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Evelyn Judy Buehler July 4, 2021 at 10:57 AM Thank you, Jennifer. Your thoughts are so appreciated. Have a wonderful holiday my friend, Evelyn :)

Sally Eslinger July 3, 2021 at 10:33 PM A delightful pen, a freer style to suit rage wild scene you’ve well-captured. I enjoyed every unfolding line. Good to see you! Evelyn Judy Buehler July 4, 2021 at 11:00 AM Thank you, Sally. Your enjoyment of this is my delight. Blessings, Evelyn :)

Victor Buhagiar July 3, 2021 at 9:54 PM A combination of hues and birds makes this a wonderful read. Best of the feast day. Evelyn Judy Buehler July 4, 2021 at 11:06 AM Thank you very much, Victor. Do have a relaxed and blessed day yourself. :D

Sotto Poet July 3, 2021 at 6:47 PM Wonderfully penned Tanka, Evelyn, your colors and hues bloom in every verse, giving a vast amount of calm and uplifting the spirit; I like it. Have a happy 4th and a blessed weekend Evelyn Judy Buehler July 3, 2021 at 7:17 PM I am honored by your warm words of support, Lasaad. Your comments always fill me with cheer. Thank you, and do have a wonderful holiday weekend, yourself.