The Wife With Flavored Eyes

One moment she was teasing him. He turned his head. Sweet eyes that twinkled testified that she adored him. Then his stomach churned! A deer appeared from the forest wild-eyed. He braked the car and swerved. A brilliant light from headlights streamed upon the startled doe which, swallowed up by fate that cold, black night, was killed on impact from the crashing blow. Now stopped beside the road, he turned to see his wife, whose soft eyes soothed him when their car would not start up and, prone to worry, he envisioned they’d get frostbite. Town was far! The flavor of those dear eyes, toasty warm, now reassured him they’d be safe from harm. 8/11/14 - Theme is "An Accident" For the three themes - Poetry Contest of shadow Hamilton
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Johnson Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 8:44 PM
Nicely flavored poem to match her eyes. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Austin Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:18 AM
Warmth in the face of tragedy. Very sad. Love, daver
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:07 AM
love the title but love the words most. :) Andie, you can make me sway by the rhythm and mood.. :) KUDOS!
Ryerson Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:25 AM
The Sonnet Queen strikes again! I wonder if this is from personal experience? Many congrats to my best friend on the Soup - Tim
Nance Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 3:52 PM
Woohoo. Grats on your win lady :) awesome as always
Mcintosh Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 11:34 AM
I love your write and am so glad you won. God bless and happy writing
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:01 AM
How about the deer? O.K. Congrats on a big win, Andrea
Manassian Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 10:56 PM
Congrats, my dear...I was so scared that his wife would die. So glad that didn't happen...too much death and dying here. Hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 10:43 PM
Very unique n wonderful write Andrea! congrats on ur first place win!
A   Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 8:56 PM
Andrea, Congratulations, --awesome themes. From headlights and dreams.... Always~ Linda
Lawless Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 3:33 PM
Very nice Andrea. Congrats on the top spot.
Smith Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:50 PM
Stopping back with a congratulatory hug
Mcintosh Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:35 PM
Congratulations. And I hope the deer is ok, though - I hope you were only using it's death as a hook for your poem and it's actually happily hunting today. God bless you.
Richards Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:27 PM
Terrific poem for the contest Andrea! Congrats on your number 1 spot !!
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:03 PM
back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
Gibson Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Back to say congratulations, Andrea, on your top placement.
Hamilton Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 1:35 PM
This has a superb flow Andrea so pleased to see you in my winners list congrats on 1st place hugs
Davis Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 8:46 AM
Andrea This is a poem of up and down emotions. Sad, sweet, comforting and loving all at once. A captivating story. Thank you for the great comment on my Super Powers poem.
Anish Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 9:13 AM
Fine poetry with a nice, warm ending. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Horsman Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 11:15 AM
one never tires of reading your sonnets or indeed your poetry full stop,,,love the story here.... regarding the problem with comments,,was on firefox,,but today on google chrome,,,but hapened again on Anne Lise she as gone to page two of her comments on her latest, and i could not post a comment till i came out and stated again...its wired and only happens when the comment go over a full page....which when so far behind as i am,,happens a lot
Lamoureux Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Powerful imagery and fabulous story telling!
Sirak Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Sometimes I think the deer are out to get us. Last week a deer ran into the road, my husband swerved and missed him, the deer stumbled then regained his balance, kicked out the fog light and cracked our bumper and ran off!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 9:23 AM
That ungrateful Bass Terd *lol* I'm glad it was only the car that was hurt.
Gibson Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Sad, but I almost something would get the one that is eating all of my tomatoes. Grrrrrrr! Good luck, Andrea, with this great write.
Harrell Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Hum, wonder what it looks like. Just pull your leg, Andrea. Good job :
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 6:49 PM
ran out of room but 30,000 is a Low Low Ball estimate on poems...There are over 10k poems, just in my house.
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