The Wife With Flavored Eyes

One moment she was teasing him. He turned his head. Sweet eyes that twinkled testified that she adored him. Then his stomach churned! A deer appeared from the forest wild-eyed. He braked the car and swerved. A brilliant light from headlights streamed upon the startled doe which, swallowed up by fate that cold, black night, was killed on impact from the crashing blow. Now stopped beside the road, he turned to see his wife, whose soft eyes soothed him when their car would not start up and, prone to worry, he envisioned they’d get frostbite. Town was far! The flavor of those dear eyes, toasty warm, now reassured him they’d be safe from harm. 8/11/14 - Theme is "An Accident" For the three themes - Poetry Contest of shadow Hamilton

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Date: 8/17/2014 8:44:00 PM
Nicely flavored poem to match her eyes. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:18:00 AM
Warmth in the face of tragedy. Very sad. Love, daver
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:07:00 AM
love the title but love the words most. :) Andie, you can make me sway by the rhythm and mood.. :) KUDOS!
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Date: 8/17/2014 2:25:00 AM
The Sonnet Queen strikes again! I wonder if this is from personal experience? Many congrats to my best friend on the Soup - Tim
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Date: 8/16/2014 3:52:00 PM
Woohoo. Grats on your win lady :) awesome as always
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Date: 8/16/2014 11:34:00 AM
I love your write and am so glad you won. God bless and happy writing
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Date: 8/16/2014 1:01:00 AM
How about the deer? O.K. Congrats on a big win, Andrea
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Date: 8/15/2014 10:56:00 PM
Congrats, my dear...I was so scared that his wife would die. So glad that didn't happen...too much death and dying here. Hugs
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Date: 8/15/2014 10:43:00 PM
Very unique n wonderful write Andrea! congrats on ur first place win!
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Date: 8/15/2014 8:56:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations, --awesome themes. From headlights and dreams.... Always~ Linda
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Date: 8/15/2014 3:33:00 PM
Very nice Andrea. Congrats on the top spot.
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Date: 8/15/2014 2:50:00 PM
Stopping back with a congratulatory hug
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Date: 8/15/2014 2:35:00 PM
Congratulations. And I hope the deer is ok, though - I hope you were only using it's death as a hook for your poem and it's actually happily hunting today. God bless you.
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Date: 8/15/2014 2:27:00 PM
Terrific poem for the contest Andrea! Congrats on your number 1 spot !!
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Date: 8/15/2014 2:03:00 PM
back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/15/2014 2:01:00 PM
Back to say congratulations, Andrea, on your top placement.
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Date: 8/15/2014 1:35:00 PM
This has a superb flow Andrea so pleased to see you in my winners list congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 8/15/2014 8:46:00 AM
Andrea This is a poem of up and down emotions. Sad, sweet, comforting and loving all at once. A captivating story. Thank you for the great comment on my Super Powers poem.
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Date: 8/14/2014 9:13:00 AM
Fine poetry with a nice, warm ending. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/13/2014 11:15:00 AM
one never tires of reading your sonnets or indeed your poetry full stop,,,love the story here.... regarding the problem with comments,,was on firefox,,but today on google chrome,,,but hapened again on Anne Lise she as gone to page two of her comments on her latest, and i could not post a comment till i came out and stated again...its wired and only happens when the comment go over a full page....which when so far behind as i am,,happens a lot
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Date: 8/13/2014 9:20:00 AM
Powerful imagery and fabulous story telling!
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Date: 8/13/2014 8:13:00 AM
Sometimes I think the deer are out to get us. Last week a deer ran into the road, my husband swerved and missed him, the deer stumbled then regained his balance, kicked out the fog light and cracked our bumper and ran off!
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Date: 8/13/2014 9:23:00 AM
That ungrateful Bass Terd *lol* I'm glad it was only the car that was hurt.
Date: 8/12/2014 7:42:00 PM
Sad, but I almost something would get the one that is eating all of my tomatoes. Grrrrrrr! Good luck, Andrea, with this great write.
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Date: 8/12/2014 7:40:00 PM
Hum, wonder what it looks like. Just pull your leg, Andrea. Good job :
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Date: 8/12/2014 6:49:00 PM
ran out of room but 30,000 is a Low Low Ball estimate on poems...There are over 10k poems, just in my house.
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