The Whittler

Upon his grandfather's rocking chair 
on the porch in the cool crisp air
sits a man with a special gift.
For he can see the soul of a tree
within a piece of wood upon his knee.

His pile of cedar gives off a sweet smell.
He picks through the pieces, eyes closed,
his touch feels what is enclosed.
As if he were to reach within the wood 
by pulling  it apart  from its protective bark 
and removing what’s inside from the dark.
The Whittler will release this soul from its cage!

Each meticulous movement of the knife in hand
is meant to bring out something so grand.
After hours of work, fingers cramping into knots
the soul held within in this piece arose
to be a magnificent fully blossomed rose.

Beautiful just like the ones his gram 
planted beneath her father's old cedar tree, by hand.


Adam Hapworth, With These Hands, 12/13/2013, Image #3
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 15, 2014 at 9:27 PM
Adam, :) Congrats, with your 'WITH THESE HANDS' winning poem. Have a nice night ~SKAT~
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January 16, 2014 at 7:54 AM
Thanks SKAT :)
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January 4, 2014 at 6:43 AM
Way to go...Sara
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January 4, 2014 at 8:16 AM
Thanks Sara :)
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January 3, 2014 at 11:08 PM
Happy 2014, Adam, congratulations, in Nette's WITH THESE HANDS contest... LINDA
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January 4, 2014 at 8:15 AM
Thanks Linda. It is a nice way to start the year.
Onclaud Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 3:35 PM
intricate,deep piece.. what great insight you have, ada.. cheers to you for a win in my contest!.. huggs
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January 3, 2014 at 9:02 PM
Thank you very much Nette. I am very honored to have placed 1st with so many other great poems. I'm really glad everyone has liked it as well :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 9:45 PM
wowowow, magnificent writing. I can see how it got top place. BIG congrats for your win.
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January 3, 2014 at 7:32 AM
Wow, thanks Andrea I appreciate it :)
Ligon Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Nice form. Inspiring story. Congrats, Adam!
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January 2, 2014 at 8:01 PM
Thank you Juliet.
Torres Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 9:54 AM
CONGRATULATIONS!!!! ..=)
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January 2, 2014 at 10:32 AM
Thank you Aiyah and congrats to you as well.
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January 2, 2014 at 1:54 AM
Contest: WITH THESE HANDS / / Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud is retreated!! - CONGRATULATIONS WITH YOUR YOUR BEAUTIFUL WINNING POEM, ADAM - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))))
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January 2, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I'm happy you enjoyed.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 12:43 AM
Beautiful! Congrats.
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January 2, 2014 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Richard. It is an honor to be placed 1st :)
Mehta Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 12:25 AM
Thanks for sharing this fine poem on "With these hands" and congrats on a fine win, Adam
Hapworth Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 7:51 AM
You're welcome Dr. Ram. Glad you enjoyed.
Anglesey Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 10:08 PM
Beautiful story, favorite line "For he can see the soul of a tree" . Congrats on the well deserved win :)
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January 2, 2014 at 7:48 AM
Thank you Karen :)
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December 29, 2013 at 5:53 PM
thanks, adam.. SOUP MAIL, urgent..:)
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December 29, 2013 at 6:16 PM
:D thank you Nette
Kelley Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 9:33 PM
The nostalgia in this is palpable...A wonderful work.
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December 28, 2013 at 7:38 AM
Thank you James.
Jones Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 6:48 PM
I was mesmerized the whole way thru...beautiful
Hapworth Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 10:45 PM
Thanks Donna :)
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