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The White Tiger

A pure-hearted soul, a floating shining spirit,

The honest power to make someone clearest,

A natured life, where all suffer and feel,

But yet, the strongest must have no fear,

The passion the connects us all might disappear,

But only the trust would last longer to bear,

Criticize, criticize, without any shame,

It's you that one who'd take the blame,

Upon the fallen angels of devotion,

Go and regain yourself some emotion,

A human whose manners are misunderstood,

What we do is what shall we could,

The looks where we misjudge the closest,

No matter how far, no matter near,

This is unfairly the pain we bear,

The heart of the faith and hope will reveal,

Upon the disheartened ones should never be mere,

Inner beauty can't be seen,

But the glowing of a fair hero shall be clear,

Clear and pure enough to thee,

To shut the misbehave to ease,

The better person shall upheave,

Is the one who suffered all the calamity,

Regret of the mistreat will be seen,

For the future's sake, all peace, just wait,

Loyalty to love is so tender,

Which tender is so keen,

But can be broke, betrayal is the thief,

But only the traitor will culminate,

His dark deeds would engulf him,

That's the punish, ending covers,

All those people shall be diminished,

Just see and wait, and bear the thee,

Sibyl will come to bless all the hurt ones,

The pure ones who have sharp patience,

As sharp as a knife, that is the thrive,

You can have it, it's what you contain,

A piercing tiger heart is what you sustain,

Go equalize and dilate, 

Go and run toward the gate,

The gate of dreams, achieve the hope,

Go floating like a tiger without a rope,

Just high-five the sky,

Come on and give it a smile,

From your pure heart that should be,

Pure, pure as a white blaze,

Awaiting the awakening of the wind,

So just be it, a white blaze,

With a pure heart, no need to rephrase,

Also keep on dreaming, and be sharp,

Like a tiger how you should be,

That a human, like how you are,

A white tiger is what you are.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/23/2016 9:12:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Nani, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 1:04:00 PM
NANI, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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Date: 12/7/2015 6:04:00 AM
Nani this is a fine piece of poetry, you surely will blaze, and blaze brightly. But I'm afraid this is no Haibun, nor is it what I am calling a Haibun FreeStyle. Haibuns are a piece of prose followed by a haiku, my version Haibun FreeStyle is a piece of prose followed a poem of any form (other than haiku). This piece will not be making it into to round two. However if you are still interested in the form, and choose to write one, please let me know, I want to see it.
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:13:00 PM
Nani, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/27/2015 10:30:00 AM
Hi Nani, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/27/2015 12:36:00 AM
Nani Mo,, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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