Paul Callus Poet Rhyme

The White Roses Died With You

We planted roses in the spring
when love was floating in the air.
A diamond glittered on your ring
reflected in your hazel eyes
the rainbow hues of paradise.
We had so much to give and share.

The months went by, the roses bloomed,
but when one day an ill wind blew – 
no mercy shown – our dreams were doomed
to wither slowly and decay.
That fateful night you passed away 
all the white roses died with you.

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[Pub. PS: It’s Poetry: An anthology of contemporary poetry from around the world 2020] 

Rhyme scheme: A-B-A-C-C-B  D-E-D-F-F-E
Contest: Rhyme Time 7 ~ Deep and Dark 
Sponsored by Lu Loo
Placed 1st

© 27th December 2018

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Line Gauthier January 20, 2021 at 3:00 PM Wow ~ so poignant and what a lovely flow. Beautiful, Paul. So glad this is published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~ Paul Callus January 21, 2021 at 1:30 PM Thank you dear Line. Your lovely feedback is appreciated. Have a lovely weekend. ~ Warm regards // paul

Angela Crabtree December 14, 2020 at 7:08 PM Very beautiful and very sad at the same time :( Paul Callus December 15, 2020 at 2:45 PM Thank you, Angela. This is one of my fav poems. Best regards // paul

Eileen Manassian March 27, 2020 at 2:08 AM How it tugs at the heart.... what a beautiful...sad write Paul Callus March 28, 2020 at 11:42 AM Thank you, Eileen. Life is made up of ups and downs...both are capable of inspiring. Hugs // paul

Kelly Deschler March 17, 2019 at 9:54 PM Your poem is so beautiful in both it's happiness and it's sadness ... Very nicely penned, my friend! Paul Callus March 18, 2019 at 12:10 PM What a pleasant surprise to have you stopping by, Kelly! Thank you for reading and leaving such lovely comments. Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Warm regards // paul

Jack Horne February 15, 2019 at 2:53 PM this is truly beautiful, my friend Paul Callus February 16, 2019 at 7:41 AM Pleased that you enjoyed it, Jack...thank you. Regards // paul

Susan Jeavons January 23, 2019 at 10:29 AM Congrats on the win Paul. Your poem showed a deep love and a deeper sadness. Blessings, Susan Paul Callus January 23, 2019 at 3:31 PM Thank you for reading and commenting, Susan. I believe this is the first time our paths have crossed! Pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire January 15, 2019 at 5:39 AM Stopping back to say congratulations on your top win, Paul! Paul Callus January 15, 2019 at 4:39 PM Thank you, Carolyn. Pleased to see your entry also on the winners' list! Hugs // paul

Heidi Sands January 14, 2019 at 5:31 PM Congratulations for your win Paul :) Paul Callus January 15, 2019 at 4:30 PM Thank you, Heidi. You did extremely well yourself:) Regards // paul

Joseph May January 14, 2019 at 5:29 PM A very moving write Paul..Congrats on your win.. Paul Callus January 15, 2019 at 4:24 PM Pleased you enjoyed it, Joseph...thank you! Regards // paul

Sandra Haight January 14, 2019 at 4:32 PM So sad and heartfelt, Paul, but so beautifully written. Congratulations on your First Place win in the contest. Sandra Paul Callus January 15, 2019 at 4:24 PM Thank you for the lovely comments and congrats, Sandra. Regards // paul

Carole Duet January 5, 2019 at 2:33 PM Beautiful, Paul. Sad but with beautiful memories of love. Paul Callus January 6, 2019 at 8:07 AM Thank you for reading and liking, Carole. Hope you are (so far)enjoying the new year. Regards // paul

Vladislav Raven January 4, 2019 at 3:19 PM Hi Paul, this is an excellent write for the subject of the contest. The joy turns to sadness and you take us along on the journey. You play the emotions so well in this excellent read. It is always an hionour to read your work Paul. This reads like a winner to me, good luck in the contest. A fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike. Paul Callus January 6, 2019 at 1:42 PM It is always a pleasure to read your insightful comments which you bring along with each and every visit that you pay, Mike...thank you. Best regards, my friend // paul

P.S. Awtry January 3, 2019 at 10:54 AM Enjoyed the imagery and the flow of this poem very much. ;) Paul Callus January 3, 2019 at 2:41 PM Thank you, P,S. Your visit is appreciated. Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire December 29, 2018 at 10:54 AM How sad are the memories of lost love conveyed in memories such as these, Paul. You wrote beautifully with this touching theme. (I've been attempting this one too.) Sending winning wishes for the "dark" contest, my friend. So glad to see you posting some new work again! Hugs, Carolyn Carolyn Devonshire January 1, 2019 at 1:57 PM Yes, your optimism draws people to you, Paul, so this poem reveals a different side. Happy New Year to you and your family! Paul Callus December 29, 2018 at 3:58 PM Sad and dark themes often cross my mind, Carolyn, though in real life I'm quite the opposite. Thank you for the lovely feedback and gl wishes. Hugs // paul

Silent One December 29, 2018 at 7:58 AM Your words bleed sadness Paul, This is a perfect poem for the contest, one that has been written so deeply that the syllable requirment has not hindered the words.. Paul Callus December 29, 2018 at 8:10 AM Thank you, S-1. Some of these contest prompts do truly serve their purpose! Regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri December 29, 2018 at 5:02 AM There will be no peace when there's no longer Love! There will be no blossoming roses when there's no kind and caring gardener! There will be no dreams and hopes when fate "blows its wind with no mercy"! A great write Paul! A stunning metaphor! A wonderful message conveyed in Beauty! A FAV. and a win! My deepest regards. God bless you. Paul Callus December 29, 2018 at 7:24 AM I am always awed by the beauty of your insightful comments, Besma. They are a joy to read, and I can assure you that they are truly cherished. Thank you for the support, and the fav! ~ Sending you warm regards and blessings, my friend. // paul

Nette Onclaud December 28, 2018 at 2:55 PM you move me so with this languid, remarkable melody, paul... the last line packs a wallop!...huggs Paul Callus December 29, 2018 at 7:21 AM Thank you, Nette. Hope you've been enjoying the weekend. Hugs // paul

Arthur Vaso December 28, 2018 at 2:26 AM So sweet, this actually has inspired me, what a wonderful poem. Paul Callus December 28, 2018 at 12:40 PM Thank you, Arthur! Hope your muse keeps you active all the year through! Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos December 28, 2018 at 1:51 AM You had me in tears with this poem Paul, so so sad! The white roses will bloom again Paul when the time is right whilst loving memories also may never be erased from our minds! Good luck in the contest and a wonderful healthy and happy 2019 for you and your family Paul Callus December 28, 2018 at 12:37 PM Reacting with misty eyes to my poem is more than I had expected, Jenny:) I am so pleased that you enjoyed it...thank you! ~ I hope you had a wonderful Christmas; may the New Year bring you and your loved ones love, good health and (in your case) lots of inspiration. Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley December 27, 2018 at 7:18 PM Your poignant poetry dances with beautiful rhythm and rhymes, Paul. Such stirring sadness reaches in and touches my heart in the most soulful way. An exceptional and expressive piece. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my dear friend.. ~Susan Susan Ashley December 28, 2018 at 1:44 PM Oh dear Paul, to search through my old poems for one you might have missed has got to make you just the best and sweetest poetry friend a girl could have.. :)) I appreciate the warmth of your wonderful heart and your persistence too, my amazing friend. Warmest wishes and hugs always ~Sue Paul Callus December 28, 2018 at 12:32 PM Thank you, Susan; as always your feedback is beautiful and leaves a sweet, mellow lingering taste. ~ Earlier today I was rummaging in your list of poems, but failed to find one which I might have missed; will go back and renew my search!! ~ Warm regards & Hugs, my friend. // paul

Wren Rushing December 27, 2018 at 6:59 PM A very sad and beautiful poem you have penned my friend! Good luck in the contest! Paul Callus December 28, 2018 at 12:27 PM Your comments are truly appreciated, my friend...thank you! Regards // paul

Heidi Sands December 27, 2018 at 5:56 PM Very nicely written Paul. I can feel it ! Paul Callus December 28, 2018 at 12:25 PM Thank you, Heidi; it is good to know your sixth sense has also enjoyed my poem:) Regards // paul

Constance La France December 27, 2018 at 5:11 PM Paul, so sadly beautiful, this is a winner for me and a FAV ~ Paul Callus December 28, 2018 at 12:23 PM Thank you for your generosity, Constance...you are a dear heart! Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2018 at 4:51 PM Sad and beautiful! Best for a win! Paul Callus December 28, 2018 at 12:21 PM Many thanks, Kim. Best regards // paul

Vijay Pandit December 27, 2018 at 4:38 PM Very apt for the contest theme Paul..you wrote it so well..the sadness feels so real. Best for a win. Paul Callus December 28, 2018 at 12:20 PM Thank you for the encouraging comments, Vijay. Regards // paul

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