The Whistler

On the subway, oftentimes
Some people stroll through, singing,
Hoping folks will pay them
For the “joy” that they are bringing.

Sometimes writers hawk their wares,
Selling self-made books,
Sure they’d make some money if
We’d only take some looks.

Then there are the beggars,
Bragging that they’re not out stealing,
Thinking this admission makes them
Somewhat more appealing.

Today, though, I encountered
Something that was new to me – 
A subway rider whistling
An annoying melody.

He seemed to whistle for himself.
He didn’t care who heard;
Then promptly he was finished
And he never said a word.

You never know what you may find
When riding on the train.
What drives me bonkers may for you
Sound like a sweet refrain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horne Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 1:06 PM
LOL, yes, I know what you mean. Here, we usually have off key whistlers! Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )
Collins Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 8:53 AM
Holy smoke Ilene. It has always driven me crazy when men walk around whistling. Thanks for writing about it. Seems most think it's so joyful. Bah!
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Great flow, rhythm, and rhyme..Enjoyable topic that you chose..Yes, what brings pleasure to one person may bring agony to another..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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