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The Whistler

On the subway, oftentimes Some people stroll through, singing, Hoping folks will pay them For the “joy” that they are bringing. Sometimes writers hawk their wares, Selling self-made books, Sure they’d make some money if We’d only take some looks. Then there are the beggars, Bragging that they’re not out stealing, Thinking this admission makes them Somewhat more appealing. Today, though, I encountered Something that was new to me – A subway rider whistling An annoying melody. He seemed to whistle for himself. He didn’t care who heard; Then promptly he was finished And he never said a word. You never know what you may find When riding on the train. What drives me bonkers may for you Sound like a sweet refrain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/24/2012 1:06:00 PM
LOL, yes, I know what you mean. Here, we usually have off key whistlers! Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )
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Date: 7/24/2012 8:53:00 AM
Holy smoke Ilene. It has always driven me crazy when men walk around whistling. Thanks for writing about it. Seems most think it's so joyful. Bah!
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Date: 7/23/2012 2:19:00 PM
Great flow, rhythm, and rhyme..Enjoyable topic that you chose..Yes, what brings pleasure to one person may bring agony to another..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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