The Whispers of Autumn

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A Lawless Sonnet

The rush of wind  c h u r n s  sported leaves of fall,
charming the  r u s t i c  path so warm and cold.
A u t u m n a l  gal whispers in brief  e n t h r a l.
S e v e r i t y  of chill is  c r o u c h i n g  bold.

Pumpkins don’t scream when scooped of seeds and fruit.
The hush of  f l i t t i n g  eyes, f l a m i n g  with oils,
f r i g h t e n  the dark, the  b l a c k e s t  cats recruit,
And bring to mind  c h a r c o a l-c a l d r o n  that boils.

I worry  n o t  of  l a t e  s h a d o w s  of  a g e.
Skulk-stares  s h u d d e r  when sight is lit with peace.
I iron  n o t  my  w r i n k l y  smile, my  s a g e.
In Autumn’s  a c e, serpent’s  r e c o i l  and  c e a s e.

Ruby, amber, and  b i t t e r s w e e t, the  s h a p e s.
The gentlest  c r u n c h  and flung football  e s c a p e s.

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Date: 8/30/2024 3:07:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lawless Sonnet, Kim: Very enthralled with the spread out words. They do create a sense of time speeding up and slowing down. Very innovative, my dear. A great contender. SuZ
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2024 5:07:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed this one! Glad you liked the spread out words! :)
Date: 8/27/2024 2:14:00 PM
Dear Kim, your personality shines- <3 always a fan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2024 3:33:00 PM
:) Thanks
Date: 8/27/2024 7:27:00 AM
Dear Kim, You have put me in the mood for Autumn which is my favorite season. I love how you used the spacing to create even more affect in your verses. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2024 7:31:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel! It is my favorite also, followed by Winter though when I get cold now, I chill down to the bone and it takes a bit to warm up. Love the fashions of Fall and Winter and the fresh brisk air. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/26/2024 11:17:00 AM
This is impressive love the flow of fall energy and the rhyme!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2024 11:26:00 AM
Thanks so much! I appreciate!
Date: 8/26/2024 10:18:00 AM
A very fluid and thoughtful poem Kim one for Reflecting on as the solar dims..As fires flicka Like ( a dolphins aquaed tail, sheens) i'll think on your Lines 'my friend' in hoar frost to Roaring gales.)
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Date: 8/26/2024 10:41:00 AM
Yay! Yay! Yay! Fall is a favorite season! Can’t wait to smell the brisk scent and that which reminds me of football, falling leaves, Halloween (don’t celebrate anymore but a great childhood memory), and yes, age LOL (we might as well laugh) Hugs, Joe!
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