The Whirlwind

The Whirlwind

I longed so for her, and
Today she flew in like an angel landing;
Backpack, suitcase, slurpee in hand,
New hair color and figure.

Down went the air conditioner;
Out came pillows and blankets,
Water bottle full of Ozarka,
Smart phone, and all of those things.

“Can I have the car keys,
I’ve got to go to the store.
I’m going with Liz tomorrow,
Turn off the kitchen radio, please, it bores.”

Oh, yes, Mom, I’m going back Monday,
How are you feeling, by the way,
Now you drink plenty of water,
And rest, won’t you, all of today.

(Yes, Monday, my head between symbols,
I’ll turn up the a/c and radio,
I’ll be able to hear the TV again,
And not interrupt the smart phone.)

But then, the house will be silent,
And waiting for a new phone call begins,

“Mom, I’m coming home for a few days,”
And my whirlwind of joy will fly in.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 9/29/2019 8:55:00 AM
We all need a good mum to turn to..
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Date: 9/28/2019 2:28:00 AM
Enjoy your "whirlwind of joy" for she leaves so suddenly!
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Date: 9/28/2019 10:13:00 AM
I do enjoy her, Caren. I can't get enough! Thanks for commenting.
Date: 9/27/2019 10:08:00 PM
this is beautiful...i remember when my oldest went off to college and i loved hearing he was coming home for a visit, and the extra friends and how noisy they could be over a football game...great penning, it brought back memories! :) hugs
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/28/2019 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra, and thank you for understanding.
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