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The Whirling Dervish -Haiku

Gaining, by loosing dancing to the mystic tune the whirling dervish

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Harry Horsman

Date: 1/22/2013 2:48:00 PM

love this, the subject a little different for me,, but i'm willing to learn...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/21/2013 12:26:00 PM

Most do not realize there is gain in loss. It is a lesson taught with age. We are diminished and yet more complete.

Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 1/22/2013 2:04:00 AM

Richard,rather than age ,it comes with understanding...my daughter is 16 and she is a fan of whirling dervishes and the philosophy related to them....sometimes i feel a bit immature compared to her... its only when we give everything then only we can think of ultimate gain....:)))

Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 1/22/2013 2:03:00 AM

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2013 7:21:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 1/22/2013 2:04:00 AM

Thanks Sara...:))