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The Whimsy Sandcastle

Standing tall and proud Mighty waves washing its feet For life is really short

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Tahera in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:44:00 PM

I love how the title denotes what is gonna beFALL it. haha. Very clever and congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:21:00 PM

Congrats Tahera my friend on your top win in Irma's contest ... with this rare beauty entry luv.. enjoy another sweet victory with luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 10:21:00 AM

Congrats Tahera .What a beautiful haiku you have penned down-kashinath

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/6/2010 9:49:00 AM

Hi. Congrats for the win with the lovely and well written piece above. Thanks for your kind comment. Eamon

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/6/2010 9:20:00 AM

good to see the placement, Tahera and best wishes.

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:07:00 AM

Congratulations Tahera on your 2nt place. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/6/2010 7:38:00 AM

Well done, Tahera! Congratulations on your win! :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2010 7:19:00 AM

A strong, succinct message in your entry, Tahera. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 4:22:00 AM

Great image of a castle comig down.. so enjoyed...Congrats my dear friend...love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:07:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, Tahera

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 12/5/2010 11:22:00 PM

Many Congrats Tahera on notching up 2nd spot amonst winners with this beautiful depiction of sandcastles............... Luv/Best wishes always ....Hitendra Mehta

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/5/2010 11:04:00 PM

oh yes this is so good, Tahera. congrats on your deserved winner. Harry

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:23:00 PM

Tahera, standing tall~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 12/5/2010 8:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear Tahera! Thank you for your nice comment. Love, Iolanda

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/4/2010 7:00:00 AM

and that sure is the truth right there in your last line, Tahera! but happy to know that sandcastle stood tall and proud :) enjoyed the message you give here in your haiku --nikko :)