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The Wheel

Symbol of mass transportation, crucial as a pair of wings; I wonder where we'd be without it in the broader scheme of things? It's hard to say just how we'd cope, or how we'd get around. I must confess a nagging fear we'd stay right on the ground, go no further than Cro-Magnons dragging women by the hair, as they forage in the jungle lugging trophies to their lair. Our trips would be restricted to the tribes across the marsh; we'd just better hope they're friendly, not belligerent or harsh. The prospects weren't too sanguine that we'd subjugate the land until the wheel's invention guaranteed our upper hand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/12/2014 9:10:00 PM
I liked this Keith. Good rhyming. I thought the line lengths changed a bit too much for some lines though. I liked your flow and you have a gift for writing. Hope to read more. Well done!
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Date: 3/9/2014 9:55:00 AM
agree with Donna in the ladies' hair department. Cro magnon does not sound good right now. xxx;s ooo'siii;
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Date: 3/7/2014 10:48:00 PM
Ahh..clever...but I'd have whopped some guy trying to pull me around by my hair!..:-) :-)
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Date: 3/7/2014 6:19:00 PM
great poem! this is clever, creative, smart and delightfully rhymed. i thoroughly enjoyed it...
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