The Wheel

Symbol of mass transportation, 
crucial as a pair of wings; 
I wonder where we'd be without it 
in the broader scheme of things? 

It's hard to say just how we'd cope, 
or how we'd get around. 
I must confess a nagging fear 
we'd stay right on the ground, 

go no further than Cro-Magnons 
dragging women by the hair, 
as they forage in the jungle 
lugging trophies to their lair. 

Our trips would be restricted 
to the tribes across the marsh; 
we'd just better hope they're friendly, 
not belligerent or harsh. 

The prospects weren't too sanguine 
that we'd subjugate the land 
until the wheel's invention 
guaranteed our upper hand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcleod Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 9:10 PM
I liked this Keith. Good rhyming. I thought the line lengths changed a bit too much for some lines though. I liked your flow and you have a gift for writing. Hope to read more. Well done!
Collins Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 9:55 AM
agree with Donna in the ladies' hair department. Cro magnon does not sound good right now. xxx;s ooo'siii;
Jones Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 10:48 PM
Ahh..clever...but I'd have whopped some guy trying to pull me around by my hair!..:-) :-)
Bauer Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 6:19 PM
great poem! this is clever, creative, smart and delightfully rhymed. i thoroughly enjoyed it...
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