The Weight of Tears

the weight of tears

for ten thousand years
more
the earth has wept
through women’s eyes

salted seas run with the moon
in tidal floods and pools 
left high upon the shore
deserted
the tears of oceans captured 
in scarred rock bowels

a woman washed in blue
sits beside a stranded pool
weeps liquid stars
into a crystal phial
she saves the weight of sorrow
in a silver capped vial

deep the rivers run
in shadowed places
they carve arteries and veins 
carry secrets drop by drop
forming stalactites and stalagmites
of misery or joy

tears drown
weigh heavy on the chest
shatter mountains
carve and coruscate the soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/19/2017 7:28:00 PM
"salted seas run with the moon in tidal floods and pools left high upon the shore". These lines are so visual. Great poem. Thanks for sharing................peace!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/19/2017 9:46:00 PM
Thank you Richard.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/19/2017 9:36:00 PM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 9/13/2017 3:30:00 PM
Beautifully personified Patricia, a real weight, "carry secrets drop by drop, how true - I enjoyed reading this
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/13/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Michael. Welcome to my home.
Date: 9/12/2017 7:51:00 AM
A big beautiful heavy write.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/12/2017 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Maureen.
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