Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Quatrain

The Weeping Willow

Underneath the branches of weeping willow
We shared our flaming passion last night
But when this morning, the sun had risen               
Found the woeful tree, glowing with delight! 



© Demetrios Trifiatis
  16 SEPTEMBER 2014

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Darlene Gifford November 12, 2014 at 9:46 PM I enjoyed your passionate poem. Oh what secrets that weeping willow has to keep. And more kisses to see before she sleeps. I'll bet she didn't sleep much that night because she was too busy peeping through her willow branches.

Tim Smith September 16, 2014 at 7:46 PM This is awesome....you have these down pat....cheers Demetrios Trifiatis September 22, 2014 at 7:52 AM Thank you my friend, Tim, for your huge comment!

Debbie Guzzi September 16, 2014 at 4:56 PM You made me smile! Light & Love Demetrios Trifiatis September 16, 2014 at 5:01 PM At least I achieved that much! Ha-ha! Thank you dear Debbie, it is nice to receive your visit! Light and love to you too!

Casarah Nance September 16, 2014 at 7:25 AM Oh this was great, it brought a smile to my face at the image. I love it. Big hugs and smiles, :) Demetrios Trifiatis September 16, 2014 at 7:28 AM Thank you, Casarah! Yes, it had the same effect on me when I first conceived it! Hugs to you too!