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The Web We Weave For Love

Staring out of my window panes at open fields and weather vanes on my tractor seat, a woman's glove? and I'm thinking about the web we weave for love Freshly tilled garden and the smell of dirt Somewhere a farm girl that wants to flirt and a pigeon soars or is it a dove? and I'm thinking about the web we weave for love Tapping the glass makes a shepherd alert and he's roaming around my field of dirt only he knows what I'm dreaming of and that I'm thinking about the web we weave for love Things I don't know, but one thing's for sure a bed of roses I've grown for her Outside a flag is waving above and I'm thinking about the web we weave for love Through the window pane a windmill turns and inside my heart a fire burns Somewhere a girl that I'm dreaming of and that I'm thinking about the web we will weave for love She and I will weave that web

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/4/2018 8:40:00 AM

I love how you did this poem, a clever, catchy and dramatic delivery of loveliness. This is a gem, unique and enchanting. Great closing line, too. You are the entire package, wherever you are, you are that. All the best and be blessed ... CayCay

Paul Callus

Date: 4/11/2018 11:36:00 AM

Very lovely lyrics, Rhoda. This poem appeals to me for obvious reasons...both the farm and windmill are part of my distant youth. Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 4/29/2018 6:50:00 PM

Paul...I remember you saying about how you grew up on a farm and I think that is awesome that we have that in common. Maybe that is why I felt comfortable early on asking for your help with my writing. Maybe farm folks have a certain aura of approachability.

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/11/2018 1:28:00 AM

Well woven , Rhoda, a lovely write. Viv x

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 4/11/2018 8:26:00 AM

Thanks so much, Viv. I appreciate your kindness and friendship

James Swartz

Date: 4/10/2018 6:07:00 PM

Beautiful words and feelings Rhoda. A wonderful poem to weave with time. Also i am still waiting on your book?

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 4/11/2018 8:25:00 AM

I've been gradually working on it and trying to keep social media accounts happy. Page 37 and counting...1/6 of the way there! Email me if you want me to send you what I have.

Silent One

Date: 4/6/2018 4:15:00 PM

Great poetry Rhonda.. You really do have a way with words... word weaver..

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 4/11/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Silent. Sorry I've gone missing. If I'm not here, I'm trying to keep up a few other accounts and work on my novel. I appreciate your kindness, friendship and support.

John Gondolf

Date: 4/6/2018 4:12:00 PM

Nicely written, Rhoda, and a great video. John

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 4/11/2018 8:22:00 AM

Hi! Thanks, John. Sorry I have been absent. Trying to get my other accounts up and running so that maybe, just maybe, when my novel is finished, some may recognize my name. (Cheers). I appreciate your support.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/6/2018 2:09:00 AM

Beautiful Rhoda, great way to display your work. Tom.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 4/11/2018 8:19:00 AM

Hi Tom. Sorry I went M.I.A. again. Just trying to spend time on my novel and getting my social media rolling. I appreciate your attention.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/5/2018 11:47:00 PM

I love your repeated verses "and I'm thinking about the web we weave for love". Beautiful poem, Rhoda.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 4/11/2018 8:18:00 AM

Thank you so much, Line. I appreciate it.