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I've not struck a chill in my head yet dander's now likely to spread once grazings start tickling I grasp I'll be sneezing the Spring drafts me feel I turn dead! the ending three moons were frowning. with dull grey skies always mounting but pacing the green place she views creation’s grace The blooms have begun their glowing the truth on the concern will stay this following winter, fresh spring is bliss and musings flirtation will stall on occasion of snatching an innocent smooth kiss Written:March 09, 2022 Tall Tales 1 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jeff Kyser

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Date: 3/12/2022 10:02:00 PM
Love this poem Lasaad…..bright, light beautiful spring poem….picture is perfect for poem! Debx
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Date: 3/9/2022 9:04:00 PM
"but pacing the green place she views creation’s grace The blooms have begun their glowing".... Beautiful Spring imagery !
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Date: 3/9/2022 2:05:00 PM
Your thoughts are deep into delight of spring, Lasaad. Especially the ending lines --stalled in disappointment of snatching a kiss.
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