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The Weakness Side

I've not struck a chill in my head
yet dander's now likely to spread
once grazings start tickling
I grasp I'll be sneezing
the Spring drafts me feel I turn dead!

the ending three moons were frowning.
with dull grey skies always mounting
but pacing the green place
she views creation’s grace
The blooms have begun their glowing

the truth on the concern will stay this
following winter, fresh spring is bliss
and musings flirtation
will stall on occasion
of snatching an innocent smooth kiss

Written:March 09, 2022

Tall Tales 1 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jeff Kyser
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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M  Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 10:02 PM
Love this poem Lasaad…..bright, light beautiful spring poem….picture is perfect for poem! Debx
George Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 9:04 PM
"but pacing the green place she views creation’s grace The blooms have begun their glowing".... Beautiful Spring imagery !
Pandit Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 2:05 PM
Your thoughts are deep into delight of spring, Lasaad. Especially the ending lines --stalled in disappointment of snatching a kiss.
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