The Way We Were

halcyon days, indelibly printed in water colored memories, 
cloud my vision, bringing tears to aging faraway eyes 
I remember other days of sunshine, water gently caressing banks
of emerald trees so vibrant they appeared to whisper and dance 
you with your brilliant thirsting eyes and impish cherub smile
when you grasped my hand to lead you into yet another of our adventures

I eagerly showed you boyhood wonders that were ours for the taking
calming racing hearts, for as brothers, together we quelled our fear 
today I stand by your ebony coffin, no longer able to walk with you 
this last adventure now your own, I can no longer comfort or protect
all that remains inside of me little brother, are the simple memories
the deepest yearning to be as we once were, together, tasting boyhood 
innocence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 4/24/2011 1:31:00 PM
Bernadette ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
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Date: 4/24/2011 11:59:00 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful piece being featured this week Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/19/2011 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Bernadette. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Bernadette. Sadly, we loose those we love...often long before we are ready for their parting. This is a lovely poem that gripped my heart. God be with you...and your little brother through the eternities. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:32:00 PM
So sorry to have missed this intially, Bernadette. This is heart touching. Congratulations on being featured this week on Soup. Love, annalise
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Bernadette
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