The Way We Look

Why are we quick to label with a name,
trying to ensure no one is the same?
Our egos expand and place us above those
struggling, who we should be drawing close.

Walking by those with their beds on the street
moving quickly, hoping none we will meet.
If steps are slow, we'll hear their silent call
and remember God above made us all.

So quickly we judge, before we can know
there goes a new friend, if only we'd show
compassion, for which our very souls yearn.
How many tears must it take us to learn?

Paintings with one color standing alone,
we find we're missing a colorful tone.
Many colors would give it much more pow,
complimentary colors placed somehow.

Colors together form beautiful wholes--
paintings of wonder speaking to our souls.
We must, at last, care for every heart,
blending as one, which we were at life's start.

January 5, 2023
for "The Way We Look" contest
by Unseeking Seeker
7th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Alex Avatar
January 10, 2023 at 9:49 PM
"Our egos expand and place us above those struggling, who we should be drawing close" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 9:08 AM
Love your line, "So quickly we judge, before we can know." So very true. Have a great day writing away...................
Proxenos Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 2:42 AM
Hi Ann, We should let our souls lead us to the best options always. Liked your poem a whole lot, Kudos. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Horsman Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 4:43 PM
Love where you've gone with this.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 4:15 PM
Loving your color-filled breath-strokes, Ann, a wondrous depiction you've crafted my friend, Aloha William
M  Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 8:11 PM
A meaningful message beautifully written Ann…..Debx
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 4:47 PM
VERY good writing AND message, Ann.
May Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 4:54 PM
So true Ann, We need so much compassion in this world, Very nicely penned
Clear Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 3:59 PM
Anne, Lovely words 'speaking to our souls' . Your creativity shows through again. And you bring such hope to all. Thanks again. suzanne
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