The Way We Look

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The way we look at other forms First notices appearance Not in harmony, with Gods norms Behold heart’s radiance Hark to love, in heart call Gods light shines within all Wherefrom bursts forth bliss squall Ego mistook The way we look 26-August-2021 Quietus

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/25/2021 10:21:00 PM

Gone through all your three poems. Each associated with God. Is it mandatory to be spiritual ? Blessings

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/25/2021 10:45:00 PM

No, no, not at all - please write on any topic of your interest. It’s just that most of my poems are spiritual, yours needn’t be.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2021 4:31:00 PM

I'm sorry, as I look at your example, I still am not getting it. I had even looked at this before. Let me go see another one.

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/7/2021 11:10:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... the new form, and even the photo. Hope to write one, inspired by your example. God bless you.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/7/2021 11:30:00 PM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2021 1:51:00 PM

so cool to see an example of your form. I really like this and especially the line with "bliss squall" in it!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/31/2021 5:56:00 PM

In truth, heart is the centre of being, in all respects!

Constance La France

Date: 8/31/2021 1:21:00 PM

Seeker, I like this combo of forms very much, great example for your contest ! ~peace and tranquility _Constance

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/31/2021 5:56:00 PM

Thanks, Constance!