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The Way We Look

The way we look at other forms
First notices appearance
Not in harmony, with Gods norms
Behold heart’s radiance

Hark to love, in heart call 
Gods light shines within all
Wherefrom bursts forth bliss squall 

Ego mistook
The way we look

26-August-2021
Quietus

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Anisha Dutta Date: 9/25/2021 10:21:00 PM Gone through all your three poems. Each associated with God. Is it mandatory to be spiritual ? Blessings Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/25/2021 10:45:00 PM No, no, not at all - please write on any topic of your interest. It’s just that most of my poems are spiritual, yours needn’t be.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/13/2021 4:31:00 PM I'm sorry, as I look at your example, I still am not getting it. I had even looked at this before. Let me go see another one. Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 9/7/2021 11:10:00 PM Thanks for sharing this... the new form, and even the photo. Hope to write one, inspired by your example. God bless you. Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/7/2021 11:30:00 PM :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/31/2021 1:51:00 PM so cool to see an example of your form. I really like this and especially the line with "bliss squall" in it! Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/31/2021 5:56:00 PM In truth, heart is the centre of being, in all respects!

Constance La France Date: 8/31/2021 1:21:00 PM Seeker, I like this combo of forms very much, great example for your contest ! ~peace and tranquility _Constance Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/31/2021 5:56:00 PM Thanks, Constance!