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A funny thing happened on the way to my wedding the white limo picked me up as scheduled along with sister and mom all dolled up My sister found a stash of the cutest mini bottles of champagne and we had to give them a try so told the chauffeur to take the scenic route We were warm and giggly till the supply finally ran out we ended up being a little late but I knew my promised one would understand It never occurred to me that with each passing minute he might think I would leave him hanging at the altar and simply not show up Of course I’m kidding we drank that champagne fast enough that we weren’t late at all Submitted on June 28, 2018 for contest A FUNNY THING HAPPENED ON THE WAY... sponsored by ROBERT HAIGH - RANKED 8TH

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Date: 7/26/2018 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, my friend.
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Date: 7/26/2018 5:01:00 PM
Thanks, Caren. Not appreciated.
Date: 7/25/2018 5:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed. We have a couple of those kind of stories too. :)
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Date: 7/25/2018 5:24:00 PM
Thanks, Susan. Not entirely true though.
Date: 7/24/2018 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, the last line is perfect!
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Date: 7/24/2018 2:48:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/5/2018 7:07:00 AM
Oops, I really enjoyed reading it and especially the twist in the end, good luck in the contest and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/24/2018 2:48:00 PM
Thank you, Faraz, Much appreciated.
Date: 6/28/2018 5:48:00 PM
oh I love the twist at the end Line - glad those bottles of champagne didnt get wasted lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2018 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

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