The Way

The way you look at me with those caring brown eyes,
makes me feel like you can see right through me,
and I know you can see right into my heart and soul.

The way you gently touch me with your gentle hands,
makes me want to just pull you in as close as possible
instantly making me melt into a puddle at your feet.

The way you softly kiss me with your tender lips,
makes me taste the passion you feel for me all over,
letting me taste the essence of your heart right to the core.

The way you tell me I love you through whispered lips,
makes me cry when I hear how much love you put into it,
letting me know that you do truly love me no matter what.

I love you more than anything and anybody in this world,
you stole my heart 6yrs ago as I stole yours at the same time,
while you still have my heart I also still have your heart too.

I promise to never let go as long as you promise me the same,
forever and always I will be yours as long as you will be mine,
no matter what happens nothing can tear our love apart again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/23/2010 12:26:00 PM
Nice thoughts of passionate with feelings of love, Rachel
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Date: 11/23/2010 11:39:00 AM
such a sweet and loving write Rachel,, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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