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The Watcher

I feel eyes watching me before I notice the woman across the room. I try not to stare, but she does not seem to mind. We are in the library, the only two here. Her caramel eyes are pensive, wary. She is hypervigilant, unhurried, unpressured. I smile but she does not reciprocate. I think of her as the watcher wondering what has caused her to develop and hone this kind of untrusting awareness.

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Date: 8/21/2021 5:55:00 AM
Sounds creepy! I love eyes, most soften with a smile but some are hard or lost. God bless!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/21/2021 7:05:00 AM
Some are hard and lost by age three; that saddens me.
Date: 8/20/2021 11:57:00 AM
Your poem offers an interesting and thought provoking glimpse at human nature, Caren. Great writing! Best of wishes, Evelyn :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/21/2021 7:05:00 AM
Thank you Evelyn

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