The Wastelands

The sun reached down
Almost as if to the ground
Bleaching the skulls and the bones

Wind rustled, rustled the ash
Gently kissing the faces of the dead
Parting with a sorrow it should be said

Nevermore would the faces rise
It was the end of earth
What touched the sky

Dauntless I set ‘cross the land
A grim determination set
Fractious in its demands

A final disposition partook me of my trust
As the bleached white skull
Transcended into dust

With malicious eye I watched it
Weary of such tricks fickle to my mind
Yet remaining vigilant for such a fix

Even as the sun fell
I watched it with vigil till the end
Even then I knew I had entered The Wastelands

The rain fell from the clouds 
Vapid as it flew against the sky
Wondering what art disposed it to take me by

And as the sun did rise
Bleating dauntless in the sky
I set ever onward

Doubtless ever onward
Dauntless ever onward
Staring vexed with oblivious eye

As a traveler I lay waste
Mournful for the wretched soul
Which had withered fair

Though I doubted 
At that forsaken stare
As I stood and watched it there

That bonded soul
Did the sun reach down upon
Bleached forever on the down

Did forever it sit upon lost ground
And as I passed
I could swear for stare

Swear I saw it watch me there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/3/2009 9:33:00 AM
Congrats Gray on your featured write. Vince
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Date: 6/1/2009 11:31:00 AM
a beautiful write, congrats on your poem being featured, God bless you from diane
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Date: 6/1/2009 12:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:36:00 PM
Gray, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2009 10:17:00 PM
Gray - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/1/2009 8:24:00 AM
Congrats on the featuring of "The Wastelands." Vince
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Date: 3/31/2009 6:38:00 PM
Dear Gray,Congratulations on YOUR POEM"The Wasteland" being Featured This week fine use of Imagery flowing through the whole POEM Superb Write ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/31/2009 5:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, this is an awesome write .. T. S. Eliot made plain in you. Love it. Love and peace.
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Date: 3/30/2009 6:41:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. This piece really gets the reader to stop and reflect. Wonderful use of imagery. Very deserving of being featured, you are truly a gifted writer. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/30/2009 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/30/2009 12:16:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/30/2009 10:51:00 AM
Congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/28/2008 2:06:00 PM
The poem certainly brings out the essence of the wasteland. I like the consistency of the theme and how it flows throughout the poem. The images are quite vivid. Great job and welcome to poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/26/2008 4:41:00 PM
Interesting thoughts for reflection. Nice use of personification. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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