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The Warrior

His armor shines in the sun, His eyes glint with ocean blue, His sword is at his side, And his shield upon his back, A tear rolls down his cheek. His mind is filled with thoughts of love, Thoughts of war, And thoughts of hate, And a tear rolls down his cheek. Like a loyal soldier, When the horns are blasted load, A kings soldier onward as he goes, As he marches into war, A tear rolls down his cheek. He charges into battle, Determination in his eyes, And in the end the battle won, The loss is only great. But for the battered warrior, This battle isn’t over, He rents his clothes, He screams and curses, For at his feet lay his friend, With an arrow in his chest The glowing sun glints off his armor, His sword is sheathed at his side, His shield upon his back, And encrusted upon his shield a blood red cross, the cross of a fallen friend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/19/2013 1:35:00 PM
Loving this one again Christopher, . Congratulations, and thank you for supporting the Ballad contest.... Forever- Linda
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Date: 12/17/2013 10:35:00 PM
Sorry for the late warm Welcome to the soup... Christopher , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Welcome to poetry soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/11/2013 9:46:00 AM
Christopher, awesome winning poem... Have a nice day..... -<-@ luv~LINDA <3
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Date: 12/8/2013 4:12:00 PM
wow, here at the bottom I find the poem that is probably MY favorite in the whole bunch. VERY good poem. Loved that repeating line you had too, a tear rolls down his cheek.
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Date: 12/5/2013 3:14:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Christopher ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/5/2013 3:13:00 PM
Christopher, I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Christopher Bagwell
Date: 12/5/2013 6:46:00 PM
thankyou

Book: Shattered Sighs