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The wall represents her space

The act of scrawling represents herself opening up but indirectly.

Eyes of a pup glistened so bright Before the day turned into night A tedious day I had to fight Cause I’m fearful of some sharp bite There I was walking in the street Booking a seat for meet and greet With a good friend I’d long to meet In a bar so full and complete Yet, she did not reciprocate! I understand it’s no blind date Nor was she even purely straight. Yet, her wall was not worth the wait. What don’t I get about the wall? Why on earth did it need to scrawl?

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Date: 3/27/2024 10:44:00 AM
Very nicely written, Mark. Congratulations on your top win! All the best...Charlie
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