The Walker

No matter the weather
every day she passes
with knees slightly bent,
hands gnarled and clenched at her sides
moving down the sidewalk.

Chin jutting forward,
her back becomes a c-curve
beneath a fine hatted-head.

Always she wears a hat ...
of knit in the winter with
a scarf from yarn to match,
or maybe, nothing matches.

In the spring, the hat 
is from a fisherman
and on another day,
its a jaunty baseball cap.

Strong will etches her face
holding her mouth in determination
to reach the end of the street,
then turn around and walk back again
with cheeks rosier and
beautiful wrinkling eyes raised to heaven.

Its the Joy of her day
this little sashay to the corner
then home up the block
as her strong heart beats,
pulsing with gratitude for
one more walk.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/4/2008 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations of being featured this week. This is a very touching poem. I can see the wonderful images of the walk celebrating another day of life. She will always have hats to wear it seems. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/4/2008 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2008 10:30:00 PM
Oh I just love this. It puts the picture right in front of me...very descriptive and lovely at the same time. Cograts on being featured!
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Date: 9/29/2008 12:03:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Sue.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/24/2008 5:50:00 AM
If we lived life with the same determination when we were young, do you realize how much we would have accomplished. Touching descriptive write. Congratulations Sue on having "The Walker" featured. Vince
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Date: 9/22/2008 5:36:00 PM
Vivid imagery forwards your thoughts in this poem in a creative way. Much to take in here. I've already read this a few times. You may want to change Its to It's in the last stanza. Congratulations on having this poem featured. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 9/22/2008 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on having this vivid and special poem featured. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/22/2008 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations Sue on an awesome featured write of the week! Love ya, Shar
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Date: 9/22/2008 7:23:00 AM
Hi Sue - I live on the very edge of a small town and a large canal runs right behind our property and it has a well graveled road that is pretty much the preferred walking path on this side of town - congrats on the feature and God Bles
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Date: 9/22/2008 7:02:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week.Sue.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/15/2008 4:41:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comments Sue. I am glad to be here also. I've enjoyed your poems also, am eager to see more.
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