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Written 1 May 2026 for 1468 Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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The Voyage of Life: Manhood


 The voyage of life trails its course,
With a mature man at the source,
A journey etched in light and shade,
Where dreams are born and fears are swayed.

With steady hand on the boat`s helm,
The man sets for the boundless realm,
The distant shore, a promised land,
On its soil, he wishes to stand

The river banks, with boulders rough,
 Promise a voyage rather tough;
Greyish clouds soon darken the sky,
Wild winds whips, with waves waxing high

Yet the boat of life bravely sails,
Through sunlit seas and stormy gales
Each woeful wave, a lesson learned,
A wisdom wide, sincerely earned.

The journey spins a vibrant hue,
Of battles fought and triumphs true;
The storms may rage, the winds may blow,
But inner strength is set to glow.

The years like seasons, come and go,
And with them, seeds of wisdom grow;
The face reflects a deeper sight,
Illumed by flame of inner light.

Love enters the scene, a bright hue,
 A new shining spark, a life true,
With a gentle face, a shared gaze,
Lighting the labyrinthine maze.

The man stumbles, the scraped knees sting,
But the spirit still  starts to sing,
Extracting strength  from courage pure,
Fanning faith in heavens, for sure.

The artist's touch, so keen and true,
Captures the spirit, fresh and new.
The voyage onward, still unfurled,
A part of this expansive world.

Indeed, Cole with his art's soft grace,
Seals the journey in time and space,
The painting stands, a testament,
To manhood’s strength, divinely lent.

The colours blend, a harmony,
Of what has been and what will be.
A life well lived, a spirit free,
For all the watching world to see.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 12:59 AM
You vividly described the scene with great rhyme and meter, Krish
George Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 10:25 PM
How smooth is the flow of sweet emotions here... these are thoughts we should all treasure in life." The journey spins a vibrant hue, Of battles fought and triumphs true; The storms may rage, the winds may blow, But inner strength is set to glow." Love this stanza... and a lovely Ekphrasis poem.
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May 2, 2026 at 4:13 PM
Your poem effectively paints a vivid picture of the journey of manhood, combining imagery and symbolism to explore themes of growth, challenge, and the search for identity. The rhythm and structure are consistent, creating a narrative that is easy to follow and engaging. Thanks for inquiring about me Krish
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