The Vow
<He said: When I first saw you, I wasn't sure.
But as time went by, I knew, and then it struck like a Thunderbolt.
It was love and I love only you.
She said: When I saw you first, it struck like a Thunderbolt and then I knew.
It was love and I Love only you.
HE said: what I have put together no one can part.
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