The Void of Flight

Into the depths of depression I sank,
To the dark bottom of that  bottomless pit,
In which problems abound and worries are heightened
Funny enough, this pit though not physical
Tells on my physical
'Tseems the force of gravity is increased upon me
My gait is slow
An my countenance an encyclopaedia of melancholy

Lost in my thoughts
And rolled deep in them
Suddenly an interrupting chirp assails my ears
Up I gaze into the skies
And then I beheld the solution to my problem -
Freedom like that of a bird

Out of that fateful encounter
Was born my desire
To untether myself from earth
And truly roam free,
Out of that fateful encounter
Was born my desire
To enter that void
In which my thoughts shall be annihilated
And the slate of mind shall be wiped clean
And made lighter than a feather,
And then shall I truly be free,
Free from earth and all its attendant worries

Even though wings I do not possess,
Wings I shall fashion for myself
Wings not as fallible like those of Icarus
I'd fashion myself more resilient wings
With which I shall liberate myself from earth
Then shall I soar free as I can ever be

03/12/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/15/2015 9:58:00 PM
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Date: 12/28/2014 8:14:00 PM
excellently penned many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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George Adenuga Ayanjompe
Date: 1/15/2015 1:54:00 PM
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Date: 12/27/2014 10:31:00 AM
George,, Congratulations on your win. I'm finally making time to read every entry, intended for me in Shadow's Hamilton depression contest. It was a tough fight, however at the end I prayed, and asked to take over and he did. WOW, it was what I call a miracle. Thanks for lifting my day with this poem... Love LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2015 1:53:00 PM
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Date: 12/9/2014 4:19:00 PM
I wish you the best, a brave write, I commend you on your courage and on your talent displayed. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/15/2015 1:53:00 PM
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:46:00 AM
Wonderful write George! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/9/2014 6:57:00 AM
congrats on win George ty for entering Linda is a special person hugs
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