The Void of Flight

Into the depths of depression I sank,
To the dark bottom of that  bottomless pit,
In which problems abound and worries are heightened
Funny enough, this pit though not physical
Tells on my physical
'Tseems the force of gravity is increased upon me
My gait is slow
An my countenance an encyclopaedia of melancholy

Lost in my thoughts
And rolled deep in them
Suddenly an interrupting chirp assails my ears
Up I gaze into the skies
And then I beheld the solution to my problem -
Freedom like that of a bird

Out of that fateful encounter
Was born my desire
To untether myself from earth
And truly roam free,
Out of that fateful encounter
Was born my desire
To enter that void
In which my thoughts shall be annihilated
And the slate of mind shall be wiped clean
And made lighter than a feather,
And then shall I truly be free,
Free from earth and all its attendant worries

Even though wings I do not possess,
Wings I shall fashion for myself
Wings not as fallible like those of Icarus
I'd fashion myself more resilient wings
With which I shall liberate myself from earth
Then shall I soar free as I can ever be

03/12/2014
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A   Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 9:58 PM
you are welcome...
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 8:14 PM
excellently penned many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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January 15, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Thank you
A   Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 10:31 AM
George,, Congratulations on your win. I'm finally making time to read every entry, intended for me in Shadow's Hamilton depression contest. It was a tough fight, however at the end I prayed, and asked to take over and he did. WOW, it was what I call a miracle. Thanks for lifting my day with this poem... Love LINDA
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January 15, 2015 at 1:53 PM
Thank you
Yvonne Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 4:19 PM
I wish you the best, a brave write, I commend you on your courage and on your talent displayed. Congratulations on your win!
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January 15, 2015 at 1:53 PM
Thank you
A. Sharma Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:46 AM
Wonderful write George! Congrats on big win!
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January 15, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Thank you
Hamilton Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 6:57 AM
congrats on win George ty for entering Linda is a special person hugs
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January 15, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Thank you
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