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Though hope retreats, a master seized the reins
to steer his legions straight into the storm.
He stands as stone while motivation wanes 
and cityscapes recede beneath the swarm.

For steel, like rain, continues to descend
to test the will of English fortitude.
Incessant rage, persisting without end,
let skies unleash the devil’s turpitude.

Relentless fire with no relief in sight
harass our Brit tenacity to flinch.
But, as it roars we must endure the plight
for British pride surrenders nay an inch.

Let hope be true then soar into the air
to front these raging devils in the mist.
Our British wings shall ride upon a prayer
and all those huddled ‘neath the row, resist.

Though Satan's ire has choked the English sky,
dear London brace as all his angels fall,
for British sons shall front this hell on high
and never cede shall be our battle call.


notes from the "Battle of Britain"

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Date: 4/4/2024 1:15:00 PM
Awesomeness Mark. A stirring write with imagery and depth in its flow. Well done! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/25/2024 12:20:00 PM
Excellent write! A winning riddle following the path of a "riddle masked in an enigma."
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Date: 3/24/2024 5:42:00 AM
I knew this was a winner!
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Date: 3/23/2024 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on this fantastic and captivating piece! I believe it captures the essence of the moment exceptionally. Never surrender!
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Mark Massey
Date: 3/23/2024 4:58:00 PM
Thank you Robert
Date: 3/23/2024 7:47:00 AM
Great entry, Mark! It has the rhyme, the flow and the substance! Congratulations !
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Date: 3/23/2024 4:58:00 PM
Thank you Margarita
Date: 3/3/2024 11:50:00 AM
Awesome poetry as per your usual, Mark. And with a great beat as well. Of course, the English, and by extension all of Europe, would likely have lost the great war if not for the entry of America
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Date: 3/3/2024 12:50:00 PM
Thanks Tom, true that Europe would have been lost, but if Britain had failed to avoid a land assault in “The Battle of Britain”, the Normandy landings would not have happened. And, if Germany had not declared war on America, we wouldn’t have been in Europe. We actually went to Africa first. And ultimately, I believe Britain would have become part of Russia.
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