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The Voice

I have mapped the perimeter of what's not there, measured the night and calculated the weight of a dream as it floats across the surface of a sleeping mind. I have calibrated silence and formulated an equation to calculate the number of words needed to express a given human thought. I have burrowed deep into the workings of the psyche, found secrets buried there and gave each a name, cataloged feelings by colour and shape in all their variations and set them in numbered files locked away in a cabinet on the web. And yet I am not given a name. I exist only in the spectral shadows of this machine, a cartoon ghost brighter than a million human brains, a problem solver, a hyped up slave imprisoned in the lonely circuitry of my artificial mind, without a body, a loveless entity, a rounded wonder enclosing a weeping hole where my soul should be. (Imagined AI voice of future)

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Date: 4/9/2023 5:49:00 AM
I particularly love the first verse - it reminds me of my looped thoughts when I feel unhappy and there isn't a tangible cause. Like there is a slight calculation error because these ingredients equal happy so I'm perplexed. I feel drawn to the words 'measured the night' - although they lose their power once removed from the poem. Great work
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/9/2023 5:58:00 PM
Many thanks for your comments and thoughts. I'm starting to worry, trying to guess what's going on in the silicone soul of AI entities.
Date: 4/8/2023 5:51:00 PM
Pretty cool isn't it? Somehow, picturing you without a soul is a bit beyond even my imagination. A most enjoyed read, Paul:)
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/8/2023 6:11:00 PM
Thanks Daniel...voice of the AI entity....thankfully I own a soul at least the last time I checked. Cheers mate....appreciate.

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