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The Vista

The Vista. 
It was a long climb up the mountain, cumbersome too
I used golf shoes, bought in a second hand shop, which
On reflection will endorse, but it had leather uppers

It was tiring, yet had no choice it was my mountain,
there were dark moment when I felt like giving up, but
the alternative was melancholy of the uncompleted.  

 I finally made it the top had no snow and whirling fog 
made it impossible to see and hear anything but my
laboured breathing and colourless wind of nothingness. 

It the way life is, those on the top see little of what is 
going on, one has to go down to ground level to see
and understand that love needs fertile soil to thrive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/30/2013 7:56:00 AM
Very wise Jan. If you're too high up - no one even sees your flag. Too busy at the foot of the mountain. I just posted one called Prideful Display - I think there's a glimmer of similarity.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 11/30/2013 5:37:00 PM
I will have look dear

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