The Visitation

The Visitation


     Said Gorbelung to Gorbeling,
     Flying in their spaceship thing,
     "Over there is planet Earth,
     I wonder what it's really worth."

     So travelling at the speed of light,
     Which gave their spacedog quite a fright,
     And leaving Saturn in the rear,
     They came upon the pale blue sphere.

     Said Gorbeling to Gorbelung,
     When transposed to Earthly tongue,
     “Down there is a little man,
     Let's communicate if we can.”

     Then sliding back a tiny panel
     And opening a communication channel,
    They beamed a light and hissing sound,
     From the spaceship to the ground.

     To Arthur on his hands and knees
     In his garden planting peas.
     Space dog Io gave a yelp,
    Thinking perhaps this might help.

     Seeing the light from heaven to ground
     And startled by the sudden sound
     Arthur ran to tell his wife,
     “An Alien spoke to me upon my life.”

     “What did it say?” his wife remarked,
     “It shone a light and then it barked.”
     Arthur's wife, who was making soup
     Ran to find young Doctor Croup

     Who, declaring Arthur quite insane,
     Gave him pills that dulled his Brain.
     But Gorbelung and Gorbeling,
     Flying in their spaceship thing.

     Left the Earth for other spheres,
     On Journeys taking many years
     And on a chart pinned to their door
     Wrote: 'EARTH COMMUNICATION POOR'.

      Barry Stebbings
       17/08/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/22/2016 4:23:00 PM
Barry how entertaining! I read it several times enjoying it more each time. Thanks for sharing it.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/23/2016 10:27:00 AM
Thank you, Beverly. Pleased you enjoyed it. Barry
Date: 8/17/2016 9:44:00 PM
Loved this clever rhymed tale of aliens. you made some typos in stanza 6, the last line, by the way.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/18/2016 2:52:00 AM
Pleased you enjoyed it Andrea. Thanks for spotting the typo. Barry
Date: 8/17/2016 6:12:00 AM
Just loved it.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/17/2016 9:58:00 AM
Thank you DM. Barry
Date: 8/17/2016 5:47:00 AM
Ha, ha ... Great job ... so nice a poem ... and so nice names of space passengers ...
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Date: 8/17/2016 9:58:00 AM
Thank you, Probir. Barry
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