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The Violinist

There is an old man who lives all alone
inside a small house, but he used to be
a famed violinist. Now he’s unknown.
No audience or visitors has he.

It doesn’t matter to that man at all.
He sits and plays his violin all day.
He plays to the ceiling, floor and each wall
surrounding him. He simply loves to play.

Although there is no one to speak one word
to that old man, no sadness does he feel.
Inside a cage he keeps a little bird,
and for that bird, the old man plays with zeal.

The bird is more than just the old man’s fan.
It sometimes sings along with that old man!

Written Oct. 25, 2022 in a rhymed form
For Lisa YY's Painting Prompted Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Watt Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Love the tale you weave of the violinist and his one remaining fan. Your mastery of the sonnet form continues to shine! Congratulations for your win, my friend ~ John
Edmonds  Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 3:21 AM
A lovely poem that suits the painting perfectly Andrea. Congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle
Seeker Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 11:47 PM
Beautiful right through, including the ending! Congratulations on your win, Andrea
Alex Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 9:26 PM
Loneliness is beautifully managed even in old age, with one of the most nourishing art form and a pet. Great sonnet. Congratulations!
Walker Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 2:53 PM
Wow, this made my heart sing. You know I love the violin and this just made me so very happy.
Bayles Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Very nice storytelling and rhyme. I like that kind of solitude sometimes when I'm writing. Playing to the bird, and it singing is a great ending.
Leffanta Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 11:14 AM
This describes my paternal grandfather, who had a love affair with his cello. Aloha!
Kerr Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 10:01 AM
Hi There Andrea, A touching portrait of a most unusual relationship. Every detail is described so well. My deepest hope is that you do find those footles. Thanks as always for your soupmail and for congratulating me on my success. Your observations on my stories and poems are a great spur Howard
Buhagiar Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 1:49 AM
Wow. I admire the way you interpreted that painting. I have no doubt it happened in real life. How radiant he must have been to have the bird sing with him.
Parker Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 4:45 PM
Simple joy is enough...Lovely piece, AD. ~:o)
Hankins Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 1:00 PM
I like this poem a lot, Andrea. Seems I saw that picture somewhere. I can relate...an old man all alone playing my Clavinova to only me. Perhaps I should acquire a bird to sing along!
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 12:56 PM
- Even though he loves to play... I feel his loneliness... lovely written, Andrea - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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