The Violinist

What’s haunting is beautiful -
it’s only the depth of violins
that invade the brain
strumming slowly,
painfully
like a saw tearing away a limb.
Saline water bubbles
at the corner of the lids
like a dam ready to burst
with its thicket of splinters
splashing open toes.
red rain runs vicariously, living
the torture of a violinist.
The rise in tempo —
a brimming cascade of limbo,
years counted as dead.
The sliding of the bow,
flicker of finger matches -
lightning quick.
What makes one sick
but the rhythm of waves
felt to the quick.

1/13/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/18/2020 1:23:00 PM
A lot of thinking and imagination went into this gem of a poem on the violin. Comparing the sound of the violin entering the brain to "a saw tearing away a limb" has a visceral sensation about it, at least it put goose bumps on my flesh! Well done, Kim. Thanks for stopping by. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2020 2:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maurice, my friend!
Date: 1/17/2020 4:13:00 PM
Beautiful, Beautiful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2020 2:23:00 PM
Thank you, thank you! xx
Date: 1/15/2020 9:28:00 PM
Enjoyed how you captured the strains of the instrument with a cry that makes audiences weep. Bravo! ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2020 10:08:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 1/14/2020 5:26:00 PM
Simply a gorgeous pen of the master poet Kim. Phenomenal poet with the most outstanding words for imagery that reaches the soul. Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2020 7:43:00 AM
Hugs-a-million, dear friend!
Date: 1/14/2020 3:32:00 PM
The violinist, an extension of the instrument where both become one is a beautiful sound to hear and see Kim. You have united them brilliantly in your lovely poem! Brava! xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2020 7:43:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 1/14/2020 12:49:00 PM
I like how you did this... Reminded me that line from a song... Strumming my pain with his fingers ..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2020 12:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, my friend!
Date: 1/14/2020 4:05:00 AM
Profound knowledge of a violinist playing. I almost heard the melody dearest, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2020 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, sweet friend!
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