The Violet Sky

The violet sky
Embraces the sun up high
As the dawn's break cry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 11, 2011 at 8:47 AM
Congrats Jan on your win!--kashinath
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March 10, 2011 at 4:10 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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March 10, 2011 at 1:25 PM
Lovely Haiku, Jan. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Freeman Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 10:51 AM
A great pleasure to see you Jan in the top ten winner's circle, with this worthy tenth place Victory. Agape, Moses
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March 10, 2011 at 9:49 AM
Beautiful haiku, Jan. I love your description of sunrise. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest Jan. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
Kopp Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 8:41 PM
well deserved win
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March 9, 2011 at 8:13 PM
Congrats Jan...Glad to see this do well. BG
Johnson Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 5:13 PM
Very pretty haiku. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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March 9, 2011 at 2:48 PM
Congrats Jan on your wonderful win in Carol's contest with this expressive entry luv.. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..
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March 9, 2011 at 2:37 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Carol, Jan
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March 9, 2011 at 2:22 PM
Congratulations, Jan!
Brown Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 11:55 AM
The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Jan. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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